The Death of a Friend, by Jessica |
 Mar 21 2006, 10:24 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
The Death of a Friend
The sun has gone down now People are asleep They dream their little sweet dreams While all I do is weep I dream of you in my sleep I think of you when I’m awake You taunt me every morning You taunt me when I go to bed I think of the last time I saw your face You where sad and depressed You didn’t want to speak But I kept asking “is something wrong?” And all you did was walk away The next day I found out from your mother That you blew out your brains You had your whole life ahead of you Why cut it short? I tried to help But now all I do is morn |
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 21 2006, 10:25 PM
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that was interesting..
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| *Phoenixx* |
Mar 21 2006, 10:48 PM
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It's actually quite depressing. I never experience this nor could I ever imagine the pain a person goes through during this process. I had a friend who had a friend who gave away their life by choice and I was deeply affected without even knowing this person.
You brought it right to the point which gave chills down my spine actually. |
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Mar 22 2006, 01:54 PM
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 wut wut in the butt? Group: Human Posts: 2,108 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 227,723 |
^i agree. it's real sad and kinda crazy, but i still liked it. it's hard to say something good about a poem with a topic like this lol.
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