BeAuTiFuL dIsAStEr, the truth |
 Mar 15 2006, 08:16 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me  Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366  |
okay so i no alot of you dont me but heres a great way to find out! ill write this poem to explain a few things see if y'all can relate.
grew up on a lonely farm
less family to be found lots of people came and went none want to stay around forgotten child hidden in the corner scars and tears are all she knows lost loves broken heart frogetful mind pretty face with abroken mirror longing for a expression so she writes and writes pen as another limb cigarettes and friends pictures and books a nerd to all smart to few forgotten to most family doesnt seem to care she left fell in love early with the man of her dreams he was taken by a car which he ran into atree she lives a awkward life few people will even care when she dies no one will even know she was there know she loves a man who loves her back her hearts still in peices she wont get back some think shes crazy others think she brillant i think im different but the truth is writing poerty photography painting singing playing strumming drumming laughing caring sleeping eating that is me who are you? |
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| *chaneun* |
Mar 15 2006, 08:39 PM
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Why did you attach that picture to your post? o_o
You posted the same thing twice. sTiCkY CaPs ArE AnNoYiNg!11!11! |
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Mar 15 2006, 08:42 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
WELL BECAUSE I DID I WANTED TO AND IF U CANT SAY ANYTHING NICE ABOUT IT THEN DONT SAY ANYTHING! GOD IS THAT SO HARD TO UNDERSTAND THATS WHY I QUIT THE LAST FORUM SITE I WAS ON! PEOPLE NEED TO LEARN KINDNESS
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Mar 15 2006, 08:57 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
are you happy now no freaking picture!!!
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Mar 15 2006, 09:06 PM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
QUOTE(scratchthisdown @ Mar 15 2006, 8:42 PM)  AND IF U CANT SAY ANYTHING NICE ABOUT IT THEN DONT SAY ANYTHING! Whaaaaaaaat? Since when do we have to be nice and not honest? F that. I like honesty ;) Cheers, Taylor`` |
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Mar 15 2006, 09:13 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
i like honesty but i like it a nice way being mean about this is what i call insercurity@! get a clue im not anyones mother but c'mon! thats a load of crap u dont have to be mean to be honest!
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Mar 15 2006, 09:45 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
thats what i thought nothing to say now
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Mar 15 2006, 09:48 PM
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daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
Oh and you HAVE to be nice to be honest? I don't think so, dear. Besides, since when do you take people's "online words" so much to heart? What do you care? I'm just a stranger that you don't even know.. :)
Cheers, Taylor`` |
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| *Blow_Don't_SUCK* |
Mar 15 2006, 09:55 PM
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That's a cute poem, but I think we found out more about you than your poem reveals based on your posts and replies.
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| *chaneun* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:10 PM
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^Yeah.
haha, I recieved a PM from her. QUOTE wow its my first day and people like u already have rude shit to say! i dont know you and at this point dontreally want to! what i do is write! i write about everything u dont like it dont read it! thats all i have to say about this subject! so please next time you comment on anything of mine please dont be rude i dont even know you Excuse me, but what exactly did I say that was so rude? |
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| *lil_chubby_cheeks2* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:13 PM
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UHM
yeah, why IS it so rude? we're giving you our honest opinion so you can get better. and don't double post  the poem is plain.  not really exciting or anything that makes me want to read on about it. |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM
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 Pocketful of Sunshine Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
Rude? Well it's annoying When Y0u Typ3 LIIKe ThiS, ok? I agree with what Yen said. It's a good poem, but gosh. You're like.. ACH.
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Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM
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daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
QUOTE(lil_chubby_cheeks2 @ Mar 15 2006, 10:13 PM) UHM yeah, why IS it so rude? we're giving you our honest opinion so you can get better. and don't double post the poem is plain. not really exciting or anything that makes me want to read on about it. Uhoh. Get ready for some bashing because you were SOOOOOOO mean! Shame on you! :P (just kidding) Cheers, Taylor`` |
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:18 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 8:39 PM) Why did you attach that picture to your post? o_o You posted the same thing twice. sTiCkY CaPs ArE AnNoYiNg!11!11! no offense but that is so true, please do not double post (READ THE COMMUNITY GUIDELINES.) . And if you have something offensive to say, take it up with that person by PMing them not using cuss words, but politely. If you don't learn now, you'll learn once you come across a mod. Thanks. 
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| *chaneun* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:26 PM
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QUOTE(Angelina Taylor @ Mar 15 2006, 10:17 PM) Uhoh. Get ready for some bashing because you were SOOOOOOO mean! Shame on you! :P (just kidding) Cheers, Taylor`` who are you? Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post. |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:37 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 7:26 PM) who are you? Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post. What he did was post the same poem twice He posted one with an attachment Then posted one without And then he fixed the one with an attachment, so it didn't have any So now we have two, exactly the same topics. Danielle |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:38 PM
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daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 10:26 PM) who are you? Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post. Uh.. why do you ask? And I don't know how they double post.. Cheers, Taylor`` |
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| *chaneun* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:39 PM
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QUOTE(Ice Cream 4 U @ Mar 15 2006, 10:37 PM) What he did was post the same poem twice He posted one with an attachment Then posted one without And then he fixed the one with an attachment, so it didn't have any So now we have two, exactly the same topics. Danielle I mean double POSTING. not double topics. READ. |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:46 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
QUOTE I mean double POSTING. not double topics. READ Sorry...I was thinking that maybe you were thinking of double topics..... And nobody double posted :\ (this isn't directed at chaneun...I think its Ranniel who called it double posted..) Only double topics (I guess I was actually thinking that Ranniel was thinking of double topics, not posting) Danielle |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:49 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
um im not a he!!! i am a grl
and the double posting was not my fault my puter is messed up and freezes so i hitthe button twice nad i dont no how to delet it |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:50 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Human Posts: 2,817 Joined: Feb 2006 Member No: 381,065 |
WOW. calm down.. it's ok.. just don`t do it again.
it`s her first day.. i think? |
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Mar 15 2006, 10:50 PM
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 "lal! laugh a little!" Group: Member Posts: 192 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,863 |
I really liked that poem.
I don't see why such a big deal is being made out of this - its just the title. A little boring though :\ Mr.Thesaurus is your friend. |
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| *lil_chubby_cheeks2* |
Mar 15 2006, 10:51 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 7:26 PM) who are you? Wait, how do they double post? whenever I do that it edits my previous post. you post and then you wait for like a period of time to post again |
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Mar 15 2006, 11:02 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
yes its my first day and yea im getting used to things
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| *chaneun* |
Mar 15 2006, 11:27 PM
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I bet you're going to turn into those cB members who just come here to post once, then quit forever.
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Mar 16 2006, 12:06 AM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
umm i dont think so but what ever!
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Mar 16 2006, 01:08 AM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
im sorry but i like this poem and i cant help that i didnt mean to post twice im sorry! can we all just drop it and do what we are here for and comment on the poem! thank you
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| *Blow_Don't_SUCK* |
Mar 16 2006, 03:28 PM
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QUOTE(chaneun @ Mar 15 2006, 10:10 PM) ^Yeah. haha, I recieved a PM from her. Excuse me, but what exactly did I say that was so rude? yeah  She gave a constructive criticsm. It was a way to tell you where you need improovement. We can't just lie and not tell you the areas you need to work on. Get used to them.
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 16 2006, 04:40 PM
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^yes, if you can't get use to constructive critique, then don't post at all.
QUOTE(scratchthisdown @ Mar 16 2006, 12:08 AM) im sorry but i like this poem and i cant help that i didnt mean to post twice im sorry! can we all just drop it and do what we are here for and comment on the poem! thank you really. because if you double posted you would've posted the same thing twice, please stop double posting. QUOTE umm i dont think so but what ever! Have you read the community guidelines yet?!  Content like this can be considered spam.  I'm sorry, but this is your second day, either read it and abide by it, or get warned by a mod. There is a link in my signature if you need to read the guidelines. I'm sorry, but this is to prevent you from cheating if you desire to become an official member. Thanks.
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Mar 16 2006, 05:16 PM
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crumpled up old piece of paper scribble on me Group: Member Posts: 49 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,366 |
well just drop it and everything will be fine ive been talking to Blow Dont Suck and its clear but for god sacks ITS MY 2ND day! okay
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