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so0o_contagious
post Mar 10 2006, 03:12 PM
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im at school. hellaaaaaa freakin' bored. no title. i never have a title.


every one can see us,
in a different way that we do.
but i know theyre blameless.
there is nothing i can undo.

everytime i hear from you,
youre in love with someone new,
everytime i see you,
you act as if your in love with me,
but i know there is nothing i can do.

you fool me with words that comfort,
you fool me with actions that speak,
thinking i was lucky everytime,
thinking it was you in my dream.

so there i was thinking my life was perfect,
only to be disturbed by the fact she was there again.
in and out of your life i can only predict,
so now im thinking were just friends.

everyone can see us in a different way that we do,
but if im not the one, pass me by and find another to pursue.

blehh. not much of a poetic.. person.
 
 
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xTINAA
post Mar 10 2006, 06:33 PM
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hello : )
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I like the meaning behind it but I don't really think the structure is all too good. It seems kind of choppy at some parts almost. Still good though!
 
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post Mar 15 2006, 01:02 AM
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Aw I can totally relate to that. Keep writng, I like it. _smile.gif
 

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