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bored, . |
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![]() team late night queen ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,602 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,861 ![]() |
im at school. hellaaaaaa freakin' bored. no title. i never have a title.
every one can see us, in a different way that we do. but i know theyre blameless. there is nothing i can undo. everytime i hear from you, youre in love with someone new, everytime i see you, you act as if your in love with me, but i know there is nothing i can do. you fool me with words that comfort, you fool me with actions that speak, thinking i was lucky everytime, thinking it was you in my dream. so there i was thinking my life was perfect, only to be disturbed by the fact she was there again. in and out of your life i can only predict, so now im thinking were just friends. everyone can see us in a different way that we do, but if im not the one, pass me by and find another to pursue. blehh. not much of a poetic.. person. |
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![]() hello : ) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 ![]() |
I like the meaning behind it but I don't really think the structure is all too good. It seems kind of choppy at some parts almost. Still good though!
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*Blow_Don't_SUCK* |
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Aw I can totally relate to that. Keep writng, I like it.
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