aksjd |
 Mar 8 2006, 11:44 PM
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i saw the promise in his eyes, felt the butterflies he tried to hide.
and i know that im not fooling myself again. 'cause i saw the laughter in those eyes, felt the excitement from deep inside. and i know it was all just a lie. go to the relationships forum & "here it is" topic. that should explain this poem. |
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Mar 9 2006, 04:58 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long. Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342 |
Ooh lala. I serisously really do love love the first line.
 Beaootiful. |
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| *Zatanna* |
Mar 9 2006, 05:07 PM
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This is wonderful. Precise and meaningful.
You remind me a little of Dorothy Parker. If you haven't heard of her or read her works, I really recommend that you do. |
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 9 2006, 11:58 PM
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very good as usual. the title is very appealing.
 aksjd
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Mar 10 2006, 12:09 AM
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<3 Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 365,309 |
^ it is appealing huh? :D
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 10 2006, 12:23 AM
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QUOTE(shes out @ Mar 10 2006, 12:09 AM)  ^ it is appealing huh? :D fkfkfhfhkfhkfhkef, yes the title stands out 
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Mar 10 2006, 08:16 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
very nice.
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Mar 10 2006, 10:10 PM
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c[: Group: Member Posts: 2,302 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,876 |
wow i really do love that first line indeed. very creative
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Mar 10 2006, 10:11 PM
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I like it, nice and simple.
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 11 2006, 10:11 AM
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i read the topic in the relationship forum, i understand now.
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