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Mar 4 2006, 03:07 AM
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![]() embers & envelopes ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 248 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 131,178 |
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Mar 4 2006, 03:55 AM
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:D ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 530 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 337,031 |
Well, to tell you the truth....
It's just an image at the top and then a jumbled mess of stuff below it. It's too dark, including the image. You direct linked the image from cB and mygen And the marquee is very annoying |
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Mar 4 2006, 04:40 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
In my opinion some changes should be made:
To your image. - Next time aim for better quality. - Make your image make since like you have a picture of you I guess, girls , patterns way to much stuff next time try focussing on either you, the girls, pattern or something else. Site: - Layout colors don't really match your image. - Put music in the table so it looks like everything else. - The marquee would look better gone. Otherwise, those are just my suggestions, but maybe better next time, but not too bad. |
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Mar 4 2006, 10:23 AM
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
I agree with Toya about the banner and the colors not matching. I don't really see any other things wrong, such as major coding problems. Maybe you should try again.
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Mar 4 2006, 10:33 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3,551 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,857 |
Well I agree with Toya w/ the image. Stick to one theme, not 3 different ones, because it really doesn't make too much sense, and it's a bit convoulted. The colors on the site don't interact w/ one another well. Overall it's just an okay job.
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Mar 4 2006, 11:47 AM
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![]() You'll find me in your dreams. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Jeng is pretty right about everything and so is Toya. Don't direct-link from other sites. That's bad.
And by the by, your site looks like crap in Mozilla/Firefox. |
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Mar 4 2006, 04:52 PM
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![]() dont steal my eggroll ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 528 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,442 |
- banner adds are annoying and url bothers me, try using geocities instead.
- image is too chaotic. focus on just one element. i notice you have a cartoon drawinging in there too that just doesnt belong. - blue border around image - do your friends know their photos are here? it just seems rude if you didn't tell them. - no comment system - color scheme doesn't match banner |
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Mar 6 2006, 04:47 PM
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Eck. Sounds in webpages are bad.
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Mar 6 2006, 08:54 PM
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![]() What? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 709 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 92,823 |
It looks like a Xanga exploded.
Like others have said, work on a unifying theme, not a jumble of everything you find interesting, |
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