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 Feb 28 2006, 08:49 PM
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 I just "got it like that".  Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238  |
He closed his eyes and he wished
imagining them together as if miles were nothing but a word a total eclipse of the brain his heart lead the way A wisper came to his ear she said she loved him he dared not open his eyes, as to end this ..." dream?" but he didn't have to he could see her clear as day, right there in front of him He could almost feel her smell her perfume so he reached out she was close enough to touch, but teasing their lips met in a clash - a silent explosion and then, he opened his eyes. to his room to a place years from now, and worlds away wondering No, knowing what it could have been like. Note: Only because I know you will never read this, Jessica. |
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Feb 28 2006, 09:12 PM
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 <3 Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 365,309 |
oh wow, i can never top that :|
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Feb 28 2006, 11:13 PM
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 Ako si Emmanuel Group: Member Posts: 150 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 361,936 |
I was just exploring CB and look what I found...cool poem, but I kinda got confused. I don't really read much poems...Actually rarely read poems.
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Feb 28 2006, 11:18 PM
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You are absolutely brilliant. I look forward to all your poems.
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 1 2006, 07:55 PM
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Wow, your good. I ^ also look foward to all your poems
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Mar 1 2006, 09:27 PM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
Thank you everyone. As long as thoughts pass through my head, most likely they will pass through these forums as well. lol. This is my... "ventilation".
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