another failure :\ |
 Feb 28 2006, 06:48 PM
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Yesterday, i was inspired to write this for you, you that's gone...
And i don't understand what happened to my perfect story life, I see you all the time, even though i try my hardest not to Our past stayed buried, didn't it? it feels like it's been dug up Haunting me, 'cause im to blame for it's sad ending..i am.. And all i really want is to run away, i moved on! just leave me! But the words can never come out right, not with you around If i ever see you again, please tell me that it's over so im safe |
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| *Zatanna* |
Feb 28 2006, 06:52 PM
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I like this. =) Nicely written. Sad, but well done. I also like that you don't feel it necessary to rhyme. Also, you can really feel the emotion of what you've written and what the writer is feeling.
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Feb 28 2006, 06:55 PM
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<3 Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 365,309 |
Awww :] thhaaank youu! i thought it would suck, 'cause i get really hars criticism from people about my way of writing. but anyway, that comment boosted my spirits :D ah, im supercharged now<3
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 1 2006, 07:56 PM
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I love your poems! Its differs from all the people I've known
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