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Imperfect, written 2004, recently re-found
razbus
post Feb 21 2006, 02:07 AM
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I just "got it like that".
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Imperfect
I know that i'm not perfect,
but who is to judge?...
to define such...
impossibility?
If it's not me,
the owner of my own soul,
the artilary of my own war,
then who could it be?
No One
not even God himself could justify,
the failure that i am.
for the unbalanced tendencies,
of my brain and heart,
make me less of a man.
And still i stand before you.
Imperfect
and perfectly happy.
 
 
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xxxSiERRAxxx
post Feb 25 2006, 12:27 AM
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"lal! laugh a little!"
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Oooh...aahh....I like this happy.gif

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*iNyCxShoRT*
post Feb 25 2006, 01:01 AM
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This poem is short and simple. I like how it's straight up about what the poems about. It's true though; I'm imperfect. And I'm happy. Good job.
 
*ranniel*
post Mar 1 2006, 08:13 PM
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Your awesome. I read all your poems, keep it short -- it's the way I like it. wink.gif
 
razbus
post Mar 1 2006, 09:31 PM
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I just "got it like that".
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thanks guys, im gonna start archiving all these pretty soon on my site. iono, when i find time. lol.
 

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