Imperfect, written 2004, recently re-found |
Imperfect, written 2004, recently re-found |
Feb 21 2006, 02:07 AM
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![]() I just "got it like that". ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
Imperfect
I know that i'm not perfect, but who is to judge?... to define such... impossibility? If it's not me, the owner of my own soul, the artilary of my own war, then who could it be? No One not even God himself could justify, the failure that i am. for the unbalanced tendencies, of my brain and heart, make me less of a man. And still i stand before you. Imperfect and perfectly happy. |
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Feb 25 2006, 12:27 AM
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![]() "lal! laugh a little!" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 192 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 364,863 |
Oooh...aahh....I like this
---Sierra |
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Feb 25 2006, 01:01 AM
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This poem is short and simple. I like how it's straight up about what the poems about. It's true though; I'm imperfect. And I'm happy. Good job.
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 1 2006, 08:13 PM
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Your awesome. I read all your poems, keep it short -- it's the way I like it.
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Mar 1 2006, 09:31 PM
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![]() I just "got it like that". ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
thanks guys, im gonna start archiving all these pretty soon on my site. iono, when i find time. lol.
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