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post Feb 13 2006, 11:44 PM
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I am but one man and I stand tall on my own two feet. These two feet will march through the three stages of life and endure all four seasons. With five senses, I'll stay aware of my surroundings and put in my work six days out of the week only to rest on the seventh. I want to be a figure that intrigues those around me as if combining all eight wonders. Then, and only then, I'll reach cloud nine and finally achieve... perfection.
 
 
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*islandgirl4eva*
post Feb 14 2006, 10:53 AM
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I really enjoyed reading this. It was quite clever. What inspired you to write something like this, Brandon?
 
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post Feb 14 2006, 05:16 PM
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QUOTE(islandgirl4eva @ Feb 14 2006, 9:53 AM)
I really enjoyed reading this. It was quite clever. What inspired you to write something like this, Brandon?
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I was bored in between classes and all I had was a napkin and a pen and I just started writing.
 
alphanumeric
post Feb 14 2006, 09:58 PM
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thats impressive:]
 
azn_at_heart
post Feb 15 2006, 12:45 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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wow yea its pretty clever n stuff
 
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post Feb 15 2006, 01:41 AM
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Wow for something that you wrote with a pen and a napkin... its something amazing.. Guess its true when they say people can get inspired at the weirdest moments.
 
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post Feb 15 2006, 10:02 AM
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It's clever. And I like how you ended on "perfection", not "ten".
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 06:37 AM
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*stands up and claps*

im not an ass kisser...
 
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