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| *Statistik* |
 Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
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The clouds awakening, winds moving at a high rate//
As god, I believe when nobody else does at the same fate// I'm on the microphone trying to bring the special effect// With the power on, it's time to spit, my vocals connect// Don't get me wrong on this, cuz I do this purely right// From ages to ages, I became maturely tight// One day I asked myself if I can accomplish something// I looked up to the sky and just noticed "One Thing" (1 thing)// Years later, I walk on the street and see things in a different part// Had some money in my pocket, bought some bread in the mart// Hearing guns shooting, sighting the drug dealers hustling// I felt like I was in a drowning surrounding, that made me feel busting// Waking up, I can see the birds chirping sitting on the beautiful trees// I was restless, but man?? It's not like I was deceased// Couldn't hold my breath for a minute or two// No emergency dudes, but it felt like my life was over, is it true?// Jumping ahead of the line was the wrong step to make// All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake// It feels like the world is beautiful, but all of us be ugly// And the ugliest people consider the world to be pretty//  uppin for feedbackzz... |
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| *lil_chubby_cheeks2* |
Feb 13 2006, 08:47 PM
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QUOTE All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake// :o i love that line, that was nice jasonn :claps: |
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Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM
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 ^_^  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,141 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,466 |
Stop rapping. Try spoken word.
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Feb 14 2006, 12:02 AM
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maybe english isnt your thing..
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| *Statistik* |
Feb 14 2006, 03:53 PM
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QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM) Stop rapping. Try spoken word.  Umm..that wasn't really a rap? 
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Feb 16 2006, 01:19 AM
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 I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
That wasn't a rap?? Lol. It should be dude. That flow was HOTT!!
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Feb 16 2006, 01:20 AM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM) Stop rapping. Try spoken word. Oh, and why do you have to be so negative? 
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Feb 16 2006, 01:25 AM
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QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 15 2006, 10:20 PM) Oh, and why do you have to be so negative? Because the guy know's good rap from bad. And, don't double post. F*ck yeah, I'm finally able to say that. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:27 AM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:25 AM) Because the guy know's good rap from bad. And, don't double post. F*ck yeah, I'm finally able to say that. I think that I am actually speechless. That was just... retarded. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:29 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 683 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 135,526 |
^Haha, your a funny person.
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Feb 16 2006, 01:36 AM
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 Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:29 AM) ^Haha, your a funny person. Respect your elders. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:42 AM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 16 2006, 1:36 AM) Respect your elders. elders?  lol. I guess you could say that. I have been a cb member since August 2004. wo0t!
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Feb 16 2006, 01:43 AM
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QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:36 PM) Respect your elders. Mind your business. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:45 AM
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Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 16 2006, 1:42 AM) elders? lol. I guess you could say that. I have been a cb member since August 2004. wo0t!Gahahaha, I remember you from way back. >>Oh and someone slandering another artist is my business. So stop being a jerk. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:48 AM
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^ Please re-read this whole thread. I told him why BrandonSaunders was being negative, because, although I don't know much about Brandon, I know enough about the guy to know that he is a relative connoisseur of hip-hop music. Hip-hop music generally includes rap, which this (no matter what Statistik says) seems to be.
He said my response was retared. I called him funny. |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
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Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
No, you were insulting. There is a difference between critisim and insulting.
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Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
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QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:45 PM) someone slandering another artist  fall back.. way back |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:53 AM
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Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
QUOTE(yo pusha @ Feb 16 2006, 1:52 AM) fall back.. way back pshhhh :P |
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Feb 16 2006, 01:55 AM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:48 AM) ... because, although I don't know much,... That was enough said right there.  Look man, you didnt need to reply for that guy anyways. That original comment was not directed towards you. Do you make it your business to defend everyone? Hm... |
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Feb 16 2006, 02:05 AM
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^ Fixed.
I figured, seeing as how he wasn't logged on, that you'd want a speedier reply. |
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| *wind&fire* |
Feb 16 2006, 06:36 AM
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oh please people hush... be constructive...
Jason youre getting better... |
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| *Statistik* |
Feb 16 2006, 03:55 PM
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you know what??
f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns |
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Feb 16 2006, 07:18 PM
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I just "got it like that". Group: Member Posts: 247 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,238 |
QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 3:55 PM) you know what?? f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns Hey, If you would have read the stuff I said, you would see that i was trying to give you a compliment. In fact, I was defending you. |
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| *Statistik* |
Feb 16 2006, 08:55 PM
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^stfu and stop being sarcastic ..
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Feb 16 2006, 11:30 PM
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QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 12:55 PM) you know what?? f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns Lol. Oh yeah, your getting better, but a lot of your lines don't make much sense. It seems like you know this, and you try to make something out of nothing sometimes. |
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Feb 16 2006, 11:38 PM
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 白人看不懂 !!!! Group: Member Posts: 3,838 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,824 |
Everyone needs to calm down now. Thanks.
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| *wind&fire* |
Feb 17 2006, 07:34 AM
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i agree with brandon... youll do better with spoken word... it was really good... and maybe try to be more gramatically correct...
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