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post Feb 8 2006, 07:27 PM
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haha ignore the topic title, it was just to lure you all here. This game, is the one where you make as many grammar mistakes as you can, and the person below has to correct you.

This will improve your grammar! How wonderful.

So here's mine:
Me and my friends will going to the park tomorrow.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:28 PM
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My friends and I will go to the park tomorrow


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I did good at that test.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:30 PM
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I did good on the test


Me, Boo, Gotti, and J hood, was at the mall chilling.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:32 PM
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NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

YOU FAIL

Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were at the mall chilling.


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Parent's bills is scary.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:33 PM
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I did well on the test. _dry.gif

Theirs alot of sad stuff in the world.

edited to add - I totally messed up, thought I was replying to tweeak's first post. I'm a monkey.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:34 PM
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Parents' bills are scary.


My sister and me went to my friends's party on Sallys house.

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damnit!

There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.


My sister and me went to my friends's party on Sallys house.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:36 PM
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There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.

My sister and I went to a party at my friend Sally's house.


I been hear for a long time.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:36 PM
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QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 8 2006, 4:32 PM)
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

YOU FAIL

Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were at the mall chilling.
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Parent's bills is scary.
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Isn't it, "Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were chilling at the mall."
I guess both ways are correct.

My parent's bills are scary.
^i think.

There are a lot of sad events in the world. biggrin.gif
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:56 PM
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Whoot it's open again! thank youuuuuu.

QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 8 2006, 4:36 PM)
There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.

My sister and I went to a party at my friend Sally's house.
I been hear for a long time.
*


I have been here for a long time.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:57 PM
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Will u giv me somethin to proofread?

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post Feb 8 2006, 07:59 PM
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oh yeah, right right.

Me skills is improving for guitar.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:01 PM
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My guitar skills are improving.

Yous is very mean. .__.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:05 PM
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You are very mean.

QUOTE(Kameko @ Feb 8 2006, 8:59 PM)
oh yeah, right right.

Me skills is improving for guitar.
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I was hoping you'd correct the question I wrote stubborn.gif .


I are smart.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:06 PM
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I am smart.

i don't understand what you want o.O

anyways, mine again:
My slow download for torrent angries me.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:09 PM
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I wrote: Will u giv me somethin to proofread?
I was hoping you'd correct it! lol

My slow download for Torrent angers me.

Mommy says I special.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:12 PM
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Will you give me something to proofread?

there corrected yours, i'll correct the other one now.

My mother thinks I'm special.

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Mine homeworks will be death for me.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:13 PM
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My homework will be the death of me.


I want to go on the mall.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:16 PM
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I want to go to the mall.

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Stop become racist!
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:16 PM
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Stop being racist!

I needs to go outside and enjoyed the fresh air.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:17 PM
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Stop becoming a racist..?


I need to go outside and enjoy the fresh air.



That are wrong thing to say" says mom.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 09:13 PM
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"Those are the wrong things to say," said Mom.

I hadn't going to the park with Sally and here friends' in a while said Paul.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:11 PM
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"I haven't gone to the park with Sally and her friends in a while," said Paul.

"fred are two friender than polly!" Liam said,
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:13 PM
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"Fred is friendlier than Polly!" Liam said.

Whom brang this back
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:53 PM
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Who brought this back?

What is you and your baby gonna do for Valentines Day!
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 11:11 PM
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What are you and your baby going to do for Valentine's Day?
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 11:13 PM
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What are you going to do with your baby on Valentine's day?

Why is chocolate raisins so good to ate. I know not.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 11:14 PM
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Why are chocolate raisins so good to eat? I don't know.

Yous a heffa.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 11:14 PM
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Why chocolate raisins are so good to eat, I know not.

edit//

She got there first. Oops.

You're a heffa. (what?)

I be going outside with Dannys' friends' grandpas' said John.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 02:30 AM
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"I'm going outside with Danny's friend's grandpa." said John.

^i think, that stumped me.

Tomorrow, I'm not not not not not not not go to the feetball game.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 09:56 AM
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Tomorrow, I'm not going to the football game.

wuts up??????
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 04:50 PM
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What's up?


How you do this mornin?
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 05:07 PM
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How are you doing this morning?

wut it do itz paul wall im da pplz champ
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 05:48 PM
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Is that even English?

How's it going? I'm Paul Wall, the people's champ.

uhhhh...? huh.gif


If i was invisible sang clay aiken
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 05:50 PM
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"If I was invisible," sang Clay Aiken.


Yo dude, today was SSIIICK.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 05:58 PM
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Hey, dude. Today was SICK.

haha, sorry about that, nicki. that was sort of a trick thing. XD

so wutz goin on errbody
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:15 PM
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So what's going on, everybody?


Life's lyke a box 'a choclates.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:18 PM
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Life is like a box of chocolate(...you never know what you're going to get).


QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 9 2006, 5:50 PM)
"If I was invisible," sang Clay Aiken.
Yo dude, today was SSIIICK.
*

Sorry, try again


I has three pitchs, low medium and kinda hie
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:20 PM
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Is it supposed to be, "If I were invisible," sang by Clay Aiken. ? OR "If I was invisible," Clay Aiken sang. ?


I have three pitches. They are: low, medium, and high.


That ain't my momma.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:44 PM
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That was a trick, because the song actually is "If I was invisible," but it's wrong. It's supposed to be "were".

The isn't my mother.

Ya'll is good.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:55 PM
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you all are good

lyke 0mg0dzszs watz Up PpLszsz?!?!
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 06:56 PM
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"Like, oh my God, what's up people."


"This guy is hot"
Please correct me.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 07:05 PM
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This guy is not hot.

QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 9 2006, 7:44 PM)
The isn't my mother.

Ya'll is good.
*

I'm going to guess that it was just a typo.

Lern how to spel stoopid.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 07:07 PM
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learn how to spell, stupid.

ur Maii ii c@ndiii
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 07:09 PM
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I did well today.


haha you a sucka.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 07:17 PM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 9 2006, 7:05 PM)
This guy is not hot.
I'm going to guess that it was just a typo.

Lern how to spel stoopid.
*

No, the point was that a lot of people can't even spell "y'all" right, even though it's a completely horrid conjunction in the first place.
 
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post Feb 9 2006, 09:13 PM
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Haha. You're a sucker.

This version are better then they other version.
 
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post Feb 10 2006, 07:10 PM
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This version is better than the other version.


QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 9 2006, 8:17 PM)
No, the point was that a lot of people can't even spell "y'all" right, even though it's a completely horrid conjunction in the first place.
*

Nicki I was talking about what you wrote before that:

QUOTE
The isn't my mother.



You reely thinc so?
 
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post Feb 11 2006, 01:32 AM
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Do you really think so?

Going to Germany are more fun then go to Austria.
 
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post Feb 11 2006, 09:47 AM
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Going to Germany is more fun than going to Austria.

Me never should go Africa South, Mommy said.
 
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post Feb 11 2006, 01:29 PM
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Feb 10 2006, 7:10 PM)
Nicki I was talking about what you wrote before that:
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Yeah, that was a typo
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 09:23 PM
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My mom says that I should never go to South Africa.

wtf, wat are Africa South!! I thought I do wrong.
 
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post Feb 18 2006, 11:02 AM
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What the f**k? What is South Africa? I thought I was wrong.

?

Sayin goodbye makes me feel like sayin sorry
 
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post Feb 21 2006, 09:25 PM
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Saying goodbye makes me feel like saying sorry.

I gonna borrow katie me pencil.
 
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I'm going to borrow Katie's pencil

?

go off a jump bridge
 
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Go jump off a bridge.

Whats one haxor.
 
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post Feb 22 2006, 07:17 PM
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What's one hacker?

4|\|D13 P\/\/|\|5 M3.

Okay. I'll stop after this.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 04:19 PM
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She owned me...?

I didn't said that.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 05:16 PM
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I didn't say that.

In the house I be all like on I was all in your house, yo. mellow.gif
 
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^(bad cheap immitation of ghetto)

In the house, I said, "I'll be in your house." ?

My siggy is secksy.
 
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post Feb 23 2006, 05:42 PM
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^(pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffft)

My signature is sexy.

The Fall of Troy is a cool super hot band.
 
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(I knew you had a fettish for Princess Peach)

The Fall of Troy is a cool, super hot band.

Nate has a funny strage fettish for Princess Peach.
 
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post Feb 26 2006, 03:36 AM
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Nate has a funny, strange, fettish for Princess Peach.

my fav show is american idol, its a well show
 
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post Feb 26 2006, 12:18 PM
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My favorite show is American Idol, it's a good show. ??

Professer Albis Dumbledore dosent dead.
 
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post Feb 26 2006, 12:42 PM
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Professer Albis Dumbledore doesn't die. --- I'm guessing you like Harry Potter, no?


Betta then myspace is da ultimage yearbookk....
 
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QUOTE(xxxSiERRAxxx @ Feb 26 2006, 12:42 PM) *
Professer Albis Dumbledore doesn't die. --- I'm guessing you like Harry Potter, no?
Betta then myspace is da ultimage yearbookk....

That's not how you spell Professor.

The Ultimate Year Book is better than Myspace.


I spelt firs wrong.
 
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post Feb 26 2006, 12:47 PM
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I spelled firs wrong.

i live in the goodest city, san diego, which is in the goodest state, california.
 
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post Feb 26 2006, 05:34 PM
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QUOTE(xxxSiERRAxxx @ Feb 26 2006, 12:42 PM) *
Professer Albis Dumbledore doesn't die. --- I'm guessing you like Harry Potter, no?
Betta then myspace is da ultimage yearbookk....


That was Professor and Albus. << but you wouldn't know it was Albus unless you've read the books..
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post Feb 28 2006, 07:36 PM
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I wish I lived in England!


prolly so u can see dat guy dat plays harry potter
 
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^It's a fragment...

You probably wish you live in England so you can see that guy who played Harry Potter.
 
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QUOTE
prolly so u can see dat guy dat plays harry potter

yes!! and orlando bloom _smile.gif .

You probably wish you lived in England so you could see that guy who plays Harry Potter.

--

reese's our the best candie evers.
 
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Reese's is the best candy ever.


wat ya doinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ?
 
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what are you doing?

Anna are mine girlfriend
 
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Anna is my girlfriend.


i likke patrick hee kool
 
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I like Patrick. He's cool.

QUOTE(xxxSiERRAxxx @ Feb 28 2006, 8:18 PM) *
Reese's is the best candy ever.
wat ya doinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ?

you sure do suck at grammar. It's supposed to be:

Reeses is the best candy ever.

Because if you put the apostrophe and s at the end, it either shows possession or:

"Reeses is is the best candy ever."


Me and my family went skating.
 
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^^ oh. I dk...I though Reese was a name or somethin :P

My family and I went ice skating.


i rok u dont haha
 
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I rock, and you don't. *laughs in corner*

Time to slit me wrists.
 
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It's time to slit my wrists.


them blowdontsuck peeps tinks dat i have worse grammer
 
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Those Blow Don't Suck people think I have the worst grammar.


(nah I was joking earlier)

I don't not like Sierra.

XD
 
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I like Sierra.

Thats cuz she bees kewl.
 
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That's because she is cool.

lyke aint it kewlers 2 beh p0pulahhhh?
 
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Like isn't it cool to be popular?! [says in high pitched, exaggerated, voice that could be in mean girls. lol. i like that movie, so dont get me wrong.]

I'm no idea, I've a nerd.. and prroud!
 
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I have no idea. I am a nerd and proud.

Sierra are weirdest than me
 
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Sierra is a name that is weirder than mine.
by the way,

it's supposed to be:

I have no idea. I am a proud nerd.

uhh

tihs friggin AIM is being a bitch.
 
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post Mar 1 2006, 08:37 PM
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sorry

this stupid aim is being a bitch.

is freaking a real word? if it is then

this freaking aim is being a bitch

i'm loving duke morest than unc
 
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I'm loving Duke more than UNC.


o r u really
 
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oh. are you really?

yess i is loving they more than UNC
 
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Yes. In fact, I am loving them more than UNC.
 
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^^nope. like this:
Yes. In fact, I am loving it more than UNC.

whoa supp?
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 10:46 PM
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woah, what's up?

i thought she is my friend.
 
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I thought she was my friend.

FRRICk out!
 

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