I'M EMO Options

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

Let's all write poetry that makes us emo!

hehe I won't start yet...my ideas aren't coming.

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

^it's kinda liek the other dude's rapping topic

[Smoogrish]

Hahah this reminds me of that one song on FFR (Flash flash revolution) called "Computer Dream" where it just goes "Nobody loves me, nobody loves me, nobody loves a compuuuuuuuter."

Hilariously emo.

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I hate this world
*finds a razor*
*slit*
EVERYONE HATES ME
I'M ALL ALONE IN THIS DARK ABYSS
SUFFOCATED INTO A MEANINGLESS EXISTENCE

[pshaa.shauna]

Im being squeezed//
sucking the life out of me//
tight//
so tight//
tighter than my 6 year brother's jeans//
so tight//

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I find myself locking all the doors
In this wretched house there's nothing more
A pain that cannot subside
All my emotions I tried to hide
So unsuccessful I was that all I knew was hatred
Everything given to me lain down before my hands were never appreciated
Encroaching upon the lurking shadows
Haunting my dreams, bringing a chaos so hallow

[ikn0wurm0m]

I hate this game
I hate the world
I hate my ex
I hate you
I hate me
I hate it
I hate
I

[pshaa.shauna]

Many ingredients make up what is called the human mind//
Thoughts, feelings, views- these are all included//
For example, all the parts that make up me as an individual//
my personality//
I have a face, a voice, amd a body that is my own//
to separate myself from others//
but my thoughts, views, and memories//
are what truely distignuish me as myself//
They are unique to only me, and are solely mine//
I find information, and I choose to use it in my own way//
All of this combines into me and forms my consiciousness//
of what's going to happen in my future//

Still, atfer knowing all of this//
I feel lost//
or better said//
confined//
I'm locked away in some cell in the corner of my mind//
exspanding my horizions only to find walls a few steps away//
I wonder what is the point of trying to be an individual//
l when others realities just get into your way//
making it almost impossible to be different//
yourself//

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

^I can see you like this thread


Dance into a sad song
Where sadness leads the way
Genuine death conducting the very song
Where you take each step closer to the only death
Must I be shunned from the rest of the world?
Where I am vanished from true, meaningful existence

Sew me a thread of life,
Cut it short and entwine it to an embroidery of nothingness
Briefly knotting them to the troubles of pain
An expansion of grief
Where a melancholic statue points towards emptiness

Write me a story that never ends
Once you die give it to someone close
She will write the story in black ink
For the story follows nothing but a colorless road
A shade of darkness that must linger on

[*tweeak*]

She makes me ill

Stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed
in
the
back.
Burn
Burn
Burnt is my aching
Heart
Heart
Heart
Attack.
Leave
me
to
DIE.






(I couldn't be assed to write my own, but this ought to be nauseating enough to prove sufficient)

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

She makes me ill

Stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed stabbed
stabbed
in
the
back.
Burn
Burn
Burnt is my aching
Heart
Heart
Heart
Attack.
Leave
me
to
DIE.

(I couldn't be assed to write my own, but this ought to be nauseating enough to prove sufficient)

lmfao love the "emo poem"

anyways who's the girl in the xanga ?

[*tweeak*]

We were friends at one point. Her old xanga was possibly even worse. I want to find her myspace. She actually makes me nauseas. Used to be decently intelligent, nice person. Even a bit too perky. Now she's just fake and unforunate beyond belief.

[*Programmer*]

comprehending all this has made me depressed

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I drown in my ignorance
Beseeching an answer never sought
As this blood bath darkens my skin to crimson
I open my wrists to the blade of life
Never again have I heard such a blissful voice

[*salcha*]

You guys are so good at being depressed

[*nightmare4taki*]

OMg, Im drowning in sorrow//
Looking for a tear to borrow//
Waiting for tomorrow
Oh the sorrow the sorrow//
Ok thats sit Im through with being depressed//
Its all good now, had to get that adressed// =]

[pshaa.shauna]

Oh woe is me!
My heart bleeds!
Oh I must die because I love you!
Watching the blood drip from my heart!
I cry for you!
You
stab
my
heart!
stabby rip stab stab!
ouch!
Sometimes I wonder what happened.
And then I remember
I stabbed you too!
because I am depressed!
oh the pain!
oh the misery!
oh the sorrow!
I like bacon.

[Smoogrish]

Oh, she likes bacon, but no bacon would ever like me.
In fact, there is nothing to beeeee.
Because everyone hates,
I hate to clean plates and can find no mates ,
I must rend my heart out
In this cold cold cold world
I hate my hair curled
And now I must cut
Because I'm in pain but
I'd much rather kill myself slowly
*rips out guts*

*sigh* I'm no good at being emo. How sad.

[pshaa.shauna]

^ ha.

(you people know you can be serious too right?)

[*nightmare4taki*]

Stepped up in the place everyone was drowned in sadness//
Im thinking to myself whats with this madness//
Everybody seems really tired and sick//
I must leave this place quick//
Is it all spiritual, will someone slit their wrist//
I don't know but I disappeared in the mist//

[yo pusha]

im depressed
hes depressed
shes depressed
cause were all depressed now
hey!

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

Bring forth the grievous past that binds us
My tears shall set forth for an eternal nightmare
No longer can I reach you with my heart
For it was pierced by your undying ignorance
While I stand here, waiting for you to say
The most fearful words one can imagine
"I love you," apathetic words that slit my veins
You lend me tears to shed
With those words, my heart seems to dread
The very thought of you leaving me

[*nightmare4taki*]

*plays the piano*

I met this girl, she was looking good
I was wishing that i could
get her number
so i could spend an entire summer
with her
see her
she kissed me
and then dissed me
now she wants me telling me and she misses me
Sadness again, playing with my mind
This girl is emotional all the time
Depression on the session is not for your boy
I take pride in living with joy
inspirational when you hear it
in your spirit
Wake up wake up and testify
I feel like an angel touching the sky

[pshaa.shauna]

I'm so sick
of all this shit
all the time
no more bliss
i
just
want
to belong to someone
i strive
to be held
but noone wants
a broken shell
i
used
to
be whole
try to sleep
when i laughed
i now weep
something
just
isnt
right

[sadolakced acid]

letting my life flow through my fingers
i let it fall away
what's the point of playing a game
if everyone loses in the end
so screw the rules and hate the mud.
hold the passion, taste the blood.
let your thoughts flow through me.
with me
about me
and let the passions lie.

hmm. i dunno if it's emo or not.

[oXMuhNirvanaXo]

Losing grip
fading away,
Hoping there will be a better day.

Hands shaking
fingers quivering
palms swetty
Knife to wrist
Make up smeared
Hold your breath
Think of me now
It will be over in a few...

Hanging with all my might
Trying to fight
I might even bite
Hold on now
For I might fall.


eh i suck ha

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I had only but one desire
To entangle you into my colorless life
Eradicating all of my forlorn solitude
But you abandoned me with your dejecting confinement
I wept in this ocean of sadness
Forever drowning in the raging waters
Bleak and dark, lost in the deepest of the depths
Forever gone, never returning
Only frozen in this cold ever-blue darkness
Dead from you

[ecargnmyst]

I hate this world
*finds a razor*
*slit*
EVERYONE HATES ME
I'M ALL ALONE IN THIS DARK ABYSS
SUFFOCATED INTO A MEANINGLESS EXISTENCE

crap..if that is emo...then...


Writhing in the darkened spaces of my mind
fallen prey to the chasm of chaos
Troubled demons consume the life
exhausting the spirit; the only light
expiring the words; Let all cries fade
Lost in the vastness and stripped of the energy
I recover only to be drained once more
Withering dreams escape my grasp
strands of hope die unclaimed
but a trace of dream left behind
Sought my sanctuary in that little thing
gave up my soul for that fragment of hope
Be the wind to carry me through
for Fear has trapped me in Time's frozen hands
Let the pain out; a burst of sound
The windows shatter and slice through my thoughts
slashing its way to the numb core of myself
A surge of feeling; an explosion of emotions
And the dark void that bound me all this time
dissolved before my very eyes

crap..i just realized most of my poems are emo..heyy..but theres a happy endingg in the end!!...heheh..and thats only the abridged version..O.o...

[*nightmare4taki*]

I had the desire and passion but quickly got lost//
Wondering how much does the next life cost//
Depression is far from a seduction//
My head hurts from reading this, I think I might have a concussion//
Not really, Im up out of this topic//
And there is no way you can stop it//

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

Suffocate me into your frigid hands
Leave me in your escape where you devour my very heart
As you paint of a life I can never enter
Where you brush all my sorrows away
In a condemned lie I lust for all these melancholic dreams
Watch them erase your happiness in one foolish line
Those black roses have their thorns piercing my skin
Forcing out dark blood through my veins
A necklace of thorns on my throad, this is the punishment I deserve
Isolated in a forest of silhouettes descrating our monumental souls
Left there to drown in our innocence
Entwining us with the pure soil ran by the dead
I reach out for your touch, for salvation
But you gazed at me wonderingly
You watched as the deceased overcame my soul
Deflowered the very human in me
I am no longer an existence
I sleep under the hallow trees
Where they embrace me in their slithering arms
Each branch locking me to nature's touch

[yo pusha]

the most beautiful thing ever
And it's here to bring terror to the bling era (yeah)
You can feel it in ya inner
It's like Grandma's house, Thanksgiving dinner
It's like a day in the park
Or at night when you get the ball and you play in the dark (swish)
It's that street corner music
Where most cats when they pull that heat go and use it
I see a black man aimin' his gun
But I'd rather see a black man claimin' his son
You know the sound is pretty
Even when you got to get down and gritty
This is money in the bank like you down wit' Diddy
This a helicopter ride around the city
And we love it cuz it brought us here
It's like a young mother braidin' her daughter's hair
It's beautiful

[pshaa.shauna]

Every night I toss and turn
Wishing you were by my side
Crying because all hope is gone
I’ve died deep down inside
I know that I should tell you
But I’m scared of what you’ll say
I’m scared that you will laugh at me
Then turn and walk away
I think I just never stopped loving him
And the pain I felt was real
Now the wound is covered up
It’s better now, its healed
You helped battle through
Even just that night
But you're now gone again
And I've lost all my light
I wish this wouldn’t have happened
My love for you's a sin
And deep inside I know
It’s a fight I’ll never win

[*Blow_Don't_SUCK*]

I cower in fear when I you bask in your unsettling glory
Always perfect, always right, always lovely
While I stand here full of flaw and imperfection
Am I but one crow among doves?
One fern amongst roses?
A moth among butterflies?
The only one without pride
Whose skin is not smooth but rough
Whose eyes are dark not bright
Whose face is not elegant but horrid
Am I not the monster born for you to pity?
For you to look down on at times of sadness
A devastating defect of life
Born deformed and died deformed
A creature of the dark.

[pshaa.shauna]

I sit here waiting
For what I don't know
Just sitting here waiting
For my future to show
Yet nothing happens
So I sit here alone
Drowning in a sea
I cryed on my own

[*tweeak*]

The anger
The pent up anger
The tedium
Ho hum
Mardy bum
Why must people mispell things?

[*nightmare4taki*]

Heart Pacing//
Heart racing//
Victory Tasting//
Victory Lacing//
Blood oozing//
Im not losing//
Im the victor, the winner//
I cook up summer in the winter//
Get a job from me//
Then we can talk homie//
Unemployed//
intensified void//
Body aching//
Pill taking//
Look at me//
I've ODed//

*passes out*

-PTC

[*chaneun*]

this life has no.. soul for me?

[ecargnmyst]

her fists clenched
mouth wide open
but no sound comes out
as if her world is on mute
behind an iron wall
that suffocates all sounds

^and that was part of my college essay! >< oops...