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 Jan 25 2006, 03:36 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long.  Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342  |
The sun took the rain away,
I wish it could be mine. It covers the whole universe in a grey and glossy shine. The lighting makes the city glow, even all the lamps are dim. And fills up the whole universe with light up to its rim. The thunder makes my heart shake, but that’s alright with me. It trembles the whole universe, The ground to the tops of the trees. The whole storm made me blissful, and left with a funeral’s grace. But as it said goodbye there was bittersweet plastered on my face. It should come back. It should come and stay. It made my universe an unoriginal every day. |
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Jan 27 2006, 10:38 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
After reading this, I'm left with a longing for the monsoon season in Sedona! I'm glad see someone else enjoys the lively expression of thunder, lightning and rain. I'm looking forward to spring showers! Nice job...
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Jan 28 2006, 11:49 PM
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 wut wut in the butt? Group: Human Posts: 2,108 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 227,723 |
i like this, cuz i like thunder and rain. it sounds like something out of a children's novel or poem book, very visual. good stuff
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