a vision, song of a woman |
 Jan 25 2006, 12:31 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
Black hair curls around my finger
Feeling it so soft and so light While I listen to a broken hearted singer Looking so calm and so convinced she’s right The kissers touch on my skin seems to linger Remaining there even in the depths of the night And I hold her to me… tight... I open my hand Release the strands Catch my breath And I’m there My heart is a piece of paper Make your mark And I will favor for you I will pine for you A wrinkling eye takes my stare Meeting mine with green I never saw before Matching my each and every daring declare Could I cross those finger tips to lips? Sighing lungs and rubbing hands, What would the penalty be? Would they chase us with their ships? I close my eyes Let go of your surprises Hold my breath Wondering if I’m really there My heart is a piece of paper Make your mark And I will favor for you I will pine for you |
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Jan 26 2006, 09:38 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Jan 25 2006, 1:31 AM) My heart is a piece of paper Make your mark And I will favor for you I will pine for you  This is fantastic! The vulnerability/subbissiveness of this is quite effective. Good job, again! 
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