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 Jan 13 2006, 06:06 PM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown  Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804  |
when we all die, we go to heaven or hell
but "to which one" no one can tell but i know sooner or later we all die so treasure every sec and be freindly, say "hi" we all never know how long each of us will live i mean there are even alot of people who die a kid you'll never noe if you or your freinds will live till the next day so dont waste ure life and do the best you can is all i say life is something that isnt always cherished by others mainly ones that take them, you know all thoses mother fu*kers so enjoy your life and dont waste it, cause remember its timed so with anyone do your best to be kind |
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Jan 13 2006, 06:10 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
I like it.
But we really don't know if there really is a "heaven" or "hell. Plus I'd like it better w/o the cuss words.. |
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Jan 13 2006, 06:14 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
well i dunno if theres a heaven or hell also but its a question that can only be answered once ure life is over....and it only sort of cursed once...and by it i meant like athe people who like to murder n stuff
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Jan 13 2006, 06:14 PM
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no, keep the cuss words.
i like it. |
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Jan 14 2006, 05:26 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I really like the message, cherishing every moment in your life.
I think you did a great job :) You know I always enjoy reading your writing, there's something about it that really makes me smile :) Don't stop writing! |
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