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 Jan 3 2006, 11:04 PM
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 Amberific.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772  |
 Either going to be for a website or xanga. I like it but I feel as though something is missing so any suggestions you guys might have would be greatly appreciated. Edit: Changed some stuff. 
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Jan 3 2006, 11:15 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Meh. I think it's a little too grungy on the texture. That&the lines are kinda overpowering. &the title should be, like... Sex Symbol. XD Or something.
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Jan 3 2006, 11:22 PM
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Lovely so far
 I think the title should be..... "Natural Beauty" Then again Marilyn Monroe did wear a lot of make up. |
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Jan 3 2006, 11:47 PM
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I like the concept. I'm not too sure about the blue in the background though. With the lines you have around Marilyn, I'm thinking maybe a bolder color for the bg. Oh, also, on her left boob, you can see some of the texturing, but the white on her suit is pretty much flat. I like the idea of contrasting the flat to texture, it's that little texture spot on her boob.
(Um, think I said 'boob' more this post than I ever have in any post). 
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Jan 3 2006, 11:50 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
It`s nice.But i think you should take off a little lines off her.
 Good Job tho
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Jan 3 2006, 11:53 PM
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 ^ignore. read> Maria. Group: Member Posts: 710 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,799 |
i dont really like those rainbow lines, but overall, its great.
for title... idk. but it reminds me of laundry and linen :P |
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Jan 4 2006, 12:04 AM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
QUOTE(fishcake-y @ Jan 3 2006, 11:15 PM) Meh. I think it's a little too grungy on the texture. That&the lines are kinda overpowering. &the title should be, like... Sex Symbol. XD Or something.  QUOTE(Zatanna @ Jan 3 2006, 11:47 PM) I like the concept. I'm not too sure about the blue in the background though. With the lines you have around Marilyn, I'm thinking maybe a bolder color for the bg. Oh, also, on her left boob, you can see some of the texturing, but the white on her suit is pretty much flat. I like the idea of contrasting the flat to texture, it's that little texture spot on her boob. (Um, think I said 'boob' more this post than I ever have in any post). Thanks for your suggestions. I agree with you, the background isn't bold enough. I'm working on finding another pattern right now. Oh and how about "Va-Voom!" for a title? |
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Jan 4 2006, 01:05 AM
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You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Oh. Yes. Much better title than mine! XD Sounds good.
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Jan 4 2006, 07:07 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
lol vavoom, cute, i like it! haha the watermark everywhere is really throwing me off lol its hard to see the layout. haha the layout is pretty good tho =) nice job
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Jan 4 2006, 07:13 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 5 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 343,528 |
Yea I owuld love! if someone could either make or show me a free xanga layout with a clown in the background or whatever. Im new at all this stuff and Im not very good with it lol!
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Jan 4 2006, 08:40 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
^ Yo, this isn't the forum to do that. You want xanga requests. But you can't make a request until you've achieved 50 posts.
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Jan 4 2006, 10:57 PM
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very nice work carrie! i'm quite fond of it.
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Jan 6 2006, 02:26 AM
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 Froggie! Woof woof. :D Group: Member Posts: 1,423 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,146 |
the green one is beautiful. the colors look really good together
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Jan 6 2006, 12:20 PM
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 I love you Group: Member Posts: 194 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,447 |
the 2nd one is just gorgeous. I love it
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