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sporadic
post Jan 1 2006, 11:17 PM
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I rather like this one...
Mind, I'm pretty new at vectoring... it's not perfect =/

 
 
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post Jan 1 2006, 11:19 PM
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I can see too many of the layers on the skin. Especially the forehead & shoulders. pinch.gif
 
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post Jan 1 2006, 11:29 PM
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I don't really do vectoring, so I don't have an eye for all the imperfections in them, so I think this is really good. It's not too complicated, but I really like it
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 05:05 PM
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Forgive for my critism, because I have alot
Eye brows-aren't your eyebrows made of hair? Not just a big blob on each side of your head-texture!!
Hair-pretty good.
eyes-aren't your eyes the same color? Then so should your vexel's eyes.
eyelashes-none, you need to fix that.
skin-pretty good
nose-it looks like 2 holes sticking out of her face.
lips-you need this tutorial-http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 05:10 PM
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You defintely need a lot more layers to define the cheeks, nose and the depth. The shading on her body isn't so great. Try filters maybe. And I agree about the eyes try making the the same color. And the lips are choppy. For a first I guess it's okay. You just need a lot more layers ot make it more detailed.
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 05:35 PM
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It scared me at first! *gasp* but its nice. happy.gif
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 05:57 PM
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Perhaps the idea was more aimed towards an abstract type vector.
If that's the case then it's pretty good. I would say I just don't like that her eyes are two different colors.
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 06:07 PM
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What I can say is pretty good, but not detailed enough. Perhaps more shading . The eyes are different colors, which I find it werid.
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 06:11 PM
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QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Jan 2 2006, 2:57 PM)
Perhaps the idea was more aimed towards an abstract type vector.
If that's the case then it's pretty good.
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Yeah, I think you guys are so set on 'realistic' vectors you can't see it for what it really is, digital art.. Abstract digital art. I like it, it's very good. I like your 'style' used on it :).
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 07:33 PM
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the shoulders look like wood.
lol.
but i wouldnt ay anything, cause i dont even know how to vect or know the techniques of it.
& the neckalces look cool.
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post Jan 2 2006, 07:53 PM
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when you make your shapes, work from the outside in. you cant have random shadows in the middle of the skin. gradually start from the outs then make your shapes continuing out from there. using more layers will help you define the features alittle better.
 
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post Jan 2 2006, 07:58 PM
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I dont like it... I dont like vectors at that... [picnch]
 
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post Jan 3 2006, 04:10 PM
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I think it's wonderful. You're new and you'll develop more shading in time. I think all of these people would have made a suggestion AND a compliment, but they were all rude. Whatever floats their boat to make themselves feel better. I love that the eyes are two different colors, it makes it different. biggrin.gif My friend's eyes are like that. But my absolute favorite part is the necklace. I bet that took forever!!! blink.gif Anyway, I think it's a wonderful start, keep up the good work!! happy.gif
 
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post Jan 3 2006, 04:12 PM
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QUOTE(RupertGrintluvr15 @ Jan 2 2006, 7:58 PM)
I dont like it... I dont like vectors at that... [picnch]
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If you dont like vectors, then why comment?


Anyways, its okay, read up on some more tutorials
Lots of shading is good......more shading everywhere...
 
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post Jan 3 2006, 09:13 PM
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i like the style you put into this. very abstract.
 
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post Jan 3 2006, 09:35 PM
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it looks really.. i dunno. um, the edges arent that smooth
 
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post Jan 5 2006, 04:13 PM
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wow, better than I could ever do.
Love the hair, and the right eye. lol
 
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post Jan 6 2006, 10:27 PM
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Jan 2 2006, 5:05 PM)
Forgive for my critism, because I have alot
Eye brows-aren't your eyebrows made of hair? Not just a big blob on each side of your head-texture!!
Hair-pretty good.
eyes-aren't your eyes the same color? Then so should your vexel's eyes.
eyelashes-none, you need to fix that.
skin-pretty good
nose-it looks like 2 holes sticking out of her face.
lips-you need this tutorial-http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/
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Actually, that's how the eyes were in the picture.

Thanks for the criticisms and compliments and such =]

And, yeah, I really hate the shoulders o.O
 

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