peep my new freestyle(s), Yippity. |
| *Statistik* |
 Dec 26 2005, 03:57 PM
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Did some work and freestyles..check them out at www.soundclick.com/kangsta...And leave some feedback here...much appreciated..oh and this aint advertising right? Juss to make sure..ight hope y'all feelin it
Give Me a Rate: 1/10 - Garbage 2/10 - Wack 3/10- Horrible... 4/10- No Comment 5/10- Ehh 6/10- Not Bad 7/10-It's Ok 8/10-Great Job 9/10-I'm feeling it. Nice. 10/10-EXCELLENT -1 |
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Dec 26 2005, 04:06 PM
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That was dopeman. The true definition of crack music.
I like that part where you said ""I'm back in the game like ricky williams running the field" . Tight stuff Flow : 8/ 10 Charisma: 10/ 10 Content: 9/10 Overall Rating : 9 / 10 |
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Dec 26 2005, 04:07 PM
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Appreciate it man...Uppin for some more feeds
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Dec 26 2005, 04:12 PM
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Wouldn't this be advertising? You should take the link out of original post and include it in your signature or something. Otherwise this would probably be closed.
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Dec 26 2005, 04:22 PM
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 im NO ordinary! akO ay taO! Group: Member Posts: 385 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 314,294 |
yo, im rapper too... but i dont think youre that good (no offense)... i dont freestyle english but i write english lyrics, but not all the time cuz i write lyrics in our language, and my crew also made an album and it was a hit in june 2005... and two of my songs was in the album...
 but now im not in my hometown.... so that will make me a solo... by the way... u make beats? cuz i make my own music....
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Dec 26 2005, 04:23 PM
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Well, I don't know, he said to leave feedback there. Sorry if its not advertising.
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Dec 26 2005, 04:49 PM
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QUOTE(spoon_fork @ Dec 26 2005, 4:22 PM) yo, im rapper too... but i dont think youre that good (no offense)... i dont freestyle english but i write english lyrics, but not all the time cuz i write lyrics in our language, and my crew also made an album and it was a hit in june 2005... and two of my songs was in the album... but now im not in my hometown.... so that will make me a solo... by the way... u make beats? cuz i make my own music....  No man I don't make beats...I attempt to make beats at times but I ain't that good...Post some of your tracks soon or later so I can hear ya...P.S. if you ain't leavin dem feedbacks don't post.
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Dec 26 2005, 05:00 PM
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im NO ordinary! akO ay taO! Group: Member Posts: 385 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 314,294 |
ah.. ok.. maybe i can post them for some other time cuz im always buzy....
so on youre freestyle.... wel, it needs a little work, cuz i cannot understand some of the words... and the flow needs a little work, cuz it sometimes goes fast and slow and sometimes didnt fit the music.... so, thats what i observe....  im very sensitive in music....
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Dec 26 2005, 05:53 PM
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no its not advertising
its the same as post audio of you singing i seen people do this before to be honest jason its wack you need to learn how to ride a beat and not just start rapping at each snare of the beat is when you should end a bar and enunciate and stretch your bars out and im gonna tell and (pentheinstrument) that you called him out alright? keep elevating k i posted |
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Dec 26 2005, 08:12 PM
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jason i see you're still doing your thing .. but you still need to work on the stuff that steven said . it sounds like you're just reading your lyrics, and the rhymes just pop in whenever .
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| *Statistik* |
Dec 26 2005, 09:18 PM
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Alright thanks for the comments & suggestions...Yeah I need to elevate.
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Dec 26 2005, 09:32 PM
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haha, the only girl that posted was brown sugar. =]
i like the beat but rapping really isnt my thing..at all. so a 7.5/10? |
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Dec 26 2005, 10:26 PM
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brotha brotha.
like steven said, you need to learn to ride the beat. enunciate enunciate enunciate i couldn't understand what you were saying so the lyrical part is gonna be left out from my review. 5/10 |
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| *Statistik* |
Dec 27 2005, 11:51 AM
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^Took your word bro
Uppin for some more feed.. |
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Dec 27 2005, 06:21 PM
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im NO ordinary! akO ay taO! Group: Member Posts: 385 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 314,294 |
and by the way bro... go for some easy beats first before rapping like superstar, cuz it will help u bounce with the music more and flow with it right....
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Dec 30 2005, 03:13 AM
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5-6/10
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Dec 30 2005, 03:23 AM
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We're in a recording studio right now... laughing.
But I won't clown you. Instead, I suggest that if you're going to 'study' any rapper, I suggest you overload on some classic A Tribe Called Quest you can develop a sense of rhythm. Be you. Don't be a stan and don't try to sound like anyone other than you. |
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Dec 30 2005, 04:47 AM
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jason, i can't believe you're still on this. i been gone, but what ever happened with that album man?be surprised if you sold that one you predicted lol. but yeah the song is...interesting, of course it's a nice beat. but yeah, tune yourself down and the beat up. keep yourself hearable but not blasting. you have improved and you rode that beat way better than you did on kangsta lovin. you're improving. 6/10 overall
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