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 Dec 25 2005, 05:11 PM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown  Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804  |
if im crying and on my knees
im asking that u'll be there for me, plz my sanity is held by one strand which was made when u 1st held my hand our relationship is tied by a string of fate that keeps me thinking of u till this date also its y when u tell me to meet u im never late i couldnt find a better friend if i tried thats y to u i hav nothing to hide even though my shyness doesnt seem to disappear but still when u need me ill always be there cuz its u that i really care for ill wait and keep open the door waiting for u to go through so we'll be together outside with each other at our side jus for then only me and u ---------- i feel lik i shouldnt post anymore of my poems here |
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Dec 25 2005, 08:04 PM
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 =] Group: Member Posts: 1,910 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,614 |
AWWW.
 thats so damn sweet.and its a really kool poem.  i love ur avatar. are u into anime?
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Dec 27 2005, 02:14 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 889 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,392 |
aww ...its soo touching! * cries*
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Dec 30 2005, 07:47 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
^-^ didnt think that people acually read my poems
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Dec 30 2005, 08:08 PM
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 Feeel X Group: Member Posts: 2,814 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,498 |
why not? it's like 10x better then what i can make. mine are god dam short. keep posting em! they awesome!
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Jan 2 2006, 08:42 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Of course people read your poems :) It's really sweet, i love this one :)
You should def keep posting too :) I loved it :) |
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