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Now and Then
Bobblehead425
post Dec 24 2005, 02:22 PM
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My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long.
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Why is it that
I'm shaking uncontrolablly,
It must be destroying me,
this heart breaking chemistry.

Why can't I feel real?
And like i normally feel?
Why can't I push you out of my head?
And these dreams so surreal?

Why don't I
Stop trembling,
and begin my heart's
reassembling?

Why Do I feel
as if I can't fall again?
It isn't impossible,
I can still break now and then.

I could still break now.
Or then.
 
 
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excellence153
post Dec 26 2005, 10:54 PM
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Hey... you're REALLY good at writing poems. Keep up the good work and you'll get far with your writinings.
 

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