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http://www.urbanlovedream.net
tag my tag board...sign my guestbook...use my stuff! come back with ur critiquin!!! |
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Moved to Website Showcase.
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oh sawwie...
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![]() Pocketful of Sunshine ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 ![]() |
Hmm.. I like it except for the yellow, I just really hate yellow.
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well geeze...
:( BUT THAAANX about everything else..lol |
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#6
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![]() je hebt het niveau van een poffertje ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,934 ![]() |
yeah, i agree with what Tina (?) said, the yellow's not too great. the layout is pretty though. Alot of purple... everything is organized, though i dont understand why you have two navigations (the imagemap) in the banner. I think you should get rid of that because first of all, the text is kinda small to read anyway. Other than that, I really like the content you have up. I liked your PSD section on your page. Nice job, keep it up.
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#7
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no one else has anything to say?
YESSHH! lol, umm...well when i showed my mom she didnt see the image mapped menu so i juss threw another one up there but yeah.. New layout will be up probably Sunday anywayz...lol. its a lot less colorful... |
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#8
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![]() je hebt het niveau van een poffertje ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,934 ![]() |
no, its not that its too colorful. It's integrating the colors together that make the layout interesting. nothing wrong with color though. hope that helps... you're off to a great start.
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Awwerz...thank you! It`s my first website. I`m so in loe with it. I want a photo gallery but I think it may cost money...
no more!? me enjoyin this... [eats popcorn] |
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![]() "my girls rock balenciaga and smoke mad marijuana" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,089 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,049 ![]() |
its hot. definetly. i left you a comment. be sure to get back.
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![]() & my dreams fall down ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,173 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 291,336 ![]() |
i love your site !! I think its really kute and you did a good job. But I was wondering if you could cut out a pic of something that I want cut out?? please if you don't mind??
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![]() ^ Mrs. Jonas ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 592 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 263,313 ![]() |
It's really nice, I guess, but all kinds of messed up in Firefox. I had to open it in IE. It's organized and your blog looks great, I'm just not a big fan of the rest of it. Can't wait to see your next version, like you said, though!
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Well, personally, I don't like it. It is far to colorful and busy, and seems a bit off in Safari. Its good for a first tho, keep trying.
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o yeah! it looks TERRIBLE in Safari! I mean...hideous..i was like...wtc!? ((wat the crap))
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![]() hindi ko maisip kung wala ka sa buhay ko. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 290 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 298,637 ![]() |
I am personally not a fan of the graphic at all, however, considering it's your very first I suppose it's better than some of the other things I see. the color pattern isn't quite flattering either (nice purple, bad yellow). your menu is absolutely tiny! :P those words are so small. you might want to make that a little more readable, as I wouldn't squint just to see what the words say. you might also want to invest in some better coding so that your site is accessible in most, if not all, browsers. your style tags are in your body (which they definitely shouldn't be) and some of the tags you use are used improperly.
hope that was of help to you<3 I'd love to see improvement, because you seem like you have potential. :] |
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well..okay.
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Server not found? Did you take it down or is the server dead? (Why am I always the one who gets this when trying to view pages? T_T)
Anyway, if it's just the server I'll edit later with some feedback. |
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no...i didnt see anything..im doing a layout change rii now but it`ll be back up in a sec..
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eh...I think i'm gonna have to agree with artislife90. I don't like it that much. the font's kinda hard to read too. however, it IS your first website, so 10/10 for effort =)
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I'll have to admit the color scheme on this one is way better than before (although the font is a little too dark to read) but it's way misaligned.. I don't know why, but nothing's fitting in your boxes.
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#21
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it`s aligned over here...when i tell my friends to go they never say anything is wrong with it...Its some servers it just looks like..WTF on..
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Okay, I finally got it to load in IE. The font issue and the alignment issue is fixed, so apparently it's just that your code isn't compatible with Firefox.
I definitely like it more than the purple one you had, but keep in mind that a lot of people use Firefox. Maybe you should download it to check on compatibility with your layouts? |
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#23
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whoa..that looks very succy! but theres no way mah mom is gonna let me keep downloading stuff....she gets very touchy with that stuff...if something happens its automatically my fault and we dont have money to just go buy a computer like its nothing. I`m lucky I have the site in the first place....
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oh, is the color off over there too? cuz over here my colors match perfectly... :(
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could you please stop double posting?!
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#26
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i really dont appreciate everyone coming at me so mean. i dont know how to delete it and its already done so what can i do about it? if you know how i can delete it just tell me. its not like i have a million posts on here.
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