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Dark Reminder of You
Dark's Angel
post Nov 21 2005, 08:14 PM
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The dark sky and stars
remind me of what we used to do
we always had fun but
that suddenly changed
why did you betray me?
why did you go to her?
we were always happy
why did you leave me?
the ocean splashes around my ankles
and I look out and see a sea of endless black
all I can be reminded of is you
why did you have to go?
I loved you and you left me
I'll be better of without you now
you changed alot when you went to her
everything is a dark reminder of you
everything.
 
 
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NgocQuyen
post Nov 21 2005, 10:44 PM
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wow...thats so....deep....lols i like it, i use to feel that way all the time... cry.gif
 
yourfriendsteph
post Nov 22 2005, 07:24 PM
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i think its best, cause you cant miss what you forget
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its pretty good
favorite line "the ocean splashes around my ankles"
 
Dark's Angel
post Nov 23 2005, 04:36 PM
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I came up with it when I was watching Ghost in the Shell...I don't know why though...It just came randomly....I'm glad you like it. It reminds me of something that happened to one of my friends...
 

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