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 Nov 15 2005, 11:43 PM
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 My name is really Matt... if you care.  Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234  |
 tell me what i can/should do since i basically suck (it makes about hmm... 4 or 5 layouts rejected that i gave up on)im NOT giving up on this one THUMBY: [thumbw]http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c181/requestlayouts90/Kirby/kirbylayout.jpg[/thumbw] i h8 it so far what can i do with it? or tell me what i can do better on this one |
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Nov 15 2005, 11:49 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
First, your colors complete suck.
 Use a coordinating colors, not completely random ones that don't match.  Click. Also, you sould use a custom shape so the blog area is smoother. Does PS have custom shapes? 'cause Elements does.Now, make good use of some brushes. Cloud brushes, of course. Or maybe some music notes? Err... Can't think of anything else really. edit// And don't give up. -nod, nod- I go through ten different styles, scrapping each complete before I come up with my new TCG post layout. |
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Nov 16 2005, 12:21 AM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
-Bad color choices
Well, if you decide to use kirby as a layout, you should choose a good image that you could make a background of. Now your art looks like some little kid copying and pasting pictures there. Good for a first try but I hope you can improve. |
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Nov 16 2005, 01:21 AM
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 Froggie! Woof woof. :D Group: Member Posts: 1,423 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,146 |
i think the 'realistic cloud' thigs don't fit (if they ARE representing clouds). you should use cartoonish ones or something. improve on the color is a def. eh i dunno.
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Nov 16 2005, 05:34 PM
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My name is really Matt... if you care. Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234 |
ok, i suck...
but i didnt get any REAL sugestions... *bump* |
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Nov 16 2005, 06:16 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
- colors are major suckage
- use brushes - get more picture of kirby and make a collage somewhat - download brushes or patterns to spark it up - use an image map I'm sorry if that seemed a bit harsh... I'm trying to help. =/ I <3 Kirby |
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Nov 16 2005, 10:27 PM
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QUOTE(add1cted2f1re @ Nov 16 2005, 5:34 PM) ok, i suck... but i didnt get any REAL sugestions...  Yes you did, change the colors its....okay |
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Nov 16 2005, 10:55 PM
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 ladybugs are hot <3 Group: Member Posts: 1,169 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,802 |
QUOTE(Kristinaa @ Nov 16 2005, 7:16 PM) - colors are major suckage - use brushes - get more picture of kirby and make a collage somewhat - download brushes or patterns to spark it up - use an image map I'm sorry if that seemed a bit harsh... I'm trying to help. =/ I <3 Kirby exactly what i was gonna sayy. maybe look at the layouts that are accepted from cB and compare it to your work. |
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