trav'l'n woman, a challenge on a different board |
 Nov 12 2005, 02:35 AM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
Humming has become silence in this car
Empty but for only me and my reveries At noon I shy from the midday sun and pull into a resturaunt not unlike the one my aunt francis owns in a hometown to someone else some place small that reminds me of friday night football games going down to the dollar general to get a coke or sneaking into 5 period late after lunch a small town has a beat different from a big city this is less rushed, steadier, easier to fall into Houston's a might different you see a body could get lost and not be found but that's where i'm going. i'm just a trav'l'n woman passing through not even this nice little resturaunt could tempt me to stay a day or two |
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Nov 13 2005, 12:59 PM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
nice. captures emotion quite nicely.
good work. |
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Nov 15 2005, 06:40 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Ahh, yes, the seductive din of metropolitan life. I'd be hard pressed to live anywhere that I can't see the Pleiades at night.
Great job! It almost reads like song lyrics. Its got a Bob Dylan feel to it. |
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