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skirls in the attic, poor little kid
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 9 2005, 02:17 PM
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Alyson woke to the sound of thumps in the cieling
Critters crawling up and down through boards and beams
She shrieked a sissy's scream and fell from her bed
"DADDY!"

In he rushed, bat in hand
turned a circle and said "What's the matter pumpkin?"
"Something's in the cieling and I'm really scared
Don't make me go back to bed, not up there."

He picked her up and put her back on the top bunk
"You've got to be brave, got to toughen up."
"But it wasnt my imagination, I know there's something there"
"We'll see about it tomorrow, go to bed Alys dear."

An hour passed and she woke again, this time to movement on her bed
tiny little eyes, hairy little feet with claws
Then she knew what was in the attic and screamed without pause
 
 
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post Nov 9 2005, 03:07 PM
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this is a nice poem! i love the way it ends ehhehe :)
 
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post Nov 9 2005, 03:12 PM
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that was so cute!
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 9 2005, 09:29 PM
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We were having little poem wars.

The creature on her bed is a squirrel. Didn't want anyone to think that it was really scary, she was just scared of a bushy tailed nut eater.
 
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post Nov 10 2005, 01:57 PM
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lol iuts like "i told you so daddy"

too bad for Alyson, poor girl.
 

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