Lies in Japan, poem |
| *torngemini* |
 Oct 28 2005, 07:14 PM
Post
#1
|
|
Guest  |
My Dream lies in Japan
(10/28/05) I was left empty handed last August I thought I knew what my life was for Now that he walked away I don't know anymore He walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. I walk aimlessly through the crowd Singing the same sad song Since he walked away It's the only song I know He walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. An empty shell is all that's left of me I only wish for ignorance to come back and be kind Everything that I am walked away Because my mind is the only thing that's alive As I remembered he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. My words put on a funny show for people to see A deceivable smile crosses my lips I held my ground day after day My happiness walked away But I never dared showed I'm torn apart Since the day he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. I look to the stars Wondering if making a wish will make a point What I believed in is shadowed Who I was was taken away Such a questionable belief in love now I will never forget the day he walked away, took a plane My dream lies in Japan. My only dream lies in Japan. |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
(1 - 6)
|
Oct 28 2005, 07:55 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown  Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
thats really good and i think that realy happened to u right cause u talked bout a specific place so its also sad
|
|
|
|
| *jooleeah* |
Oct 28 2005, 09:00 PM
Post
#3
|
|
Guest |
What a nice piece of writing. It creates a nice image in my mind. Wonderful job.
|
|
|
|
| *torngemini* |
Oct 30 2005, 06:48 PM
Post
#4
|
|
Guest |
QUOTE(azn_at_heart @ Oct 28 2005, 5:55 PM) thats really good and i think that realy happened to u right cause u talked bout a specific place so its also sad  LOL you're right and thank you for that observation ... I like when people are perceptive like that it brings some kind of humbleness to me for some reason |
|
|
|
|
Oct 30 2005, 08:21 PM
Post
#5
|
|
 ladybugs are hot <3 Group: Member Posts: 1,169 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,802 |
o0o thats really good! great job
|
|
|
|
|
Oct 30 2005, 10:43 PM
Post
#6
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,665 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 127,076 |
I really love this work.
Wonderful job! 
|
|
|
|
|
Oct 30 2005, 10:44 PM
Post
#7
|
|
 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
thats really well written
really beautiful =) |
|
|
|
 |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: