push-button girl (cut me free), a song |
 Oct 22 2005, 03:37 PM
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 dripping destruction  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929  |
push-button girl (cut me free)
i naievely thought i could change her and without doubt i tried i siad that i'd never leave her but now there's just nothing inside i met her last june in a corn tree standing beneath the sun i cut down the tree and now she's free and into the sky now she can run, but [chorus] she's a push-button girl without a soul, a push-button girl, empty and a hole and if you beleive it, that was her with a black stone heart beneath the door i tried to help her, i really did i did all that i could do but now there's just no hope left for her so please can you let me go [chorus] let me go! [x 4] she's a push-button girl throughout her soul a push-button girl, pretty and whole and if you believe it, i brought her down and now i'm joining as she drowns i deserve these chains to her, so don't! release me yea, it's © 2005 to me, so don't even think about it. |
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| *Azarel* |
Oct 22 2005, 03:42 PM
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.. corn... tree?
 Uh. What is that? The "flow" is a little kinky (in the sense that there are kinks), but I like the concept. |
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Oct 22 2005, 03:46 PM
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dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
the flow problems are probbaly from places were it's supposed to pause. it's supposed to be a song.
yes, a corn tree. |
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| *mipadi* |
Oct 23 2005, 08:20 PM
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I like it. I think it could make a good song. Do you have a melody for it?
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| *not_your_average* |
Oct 23 2005, 08:33 PM
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Hm. I didn't really understand it since some of the lines threw me off. But it has a very laid-back Jack Johnson feel to it, which makes the song seem more relaxed and approachable.
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Oct 23 2005, 11:02 PM
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dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
QUOTE(mipadi @ Oct 23 2005, 8:20 PM) I like it. I think it could make a good song. Do you have a melody for it?  errr... i had a melody for it when i wrote it, but i've since forgot it. being the musician i am, i could not sing the melody and therefore could not make a record of the melody, and i am tone deaf so can't write down the melody... yea. |
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