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true love, i hope
azn_at_heart
post Sep 30 2005, 07:55 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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*this is also on my xanga, and this is what i want not i had or have*

True Love

I have always believed in true love
But im very shy , so I would start off with a hug
someone who will always be by my side
And my true emotions to her, ill never hide
To which ill give a guide
To the very deepest of my heart
Only if she promises that she wont break it apart
Someone there to help me whenever I have a hard time
To make me comfortable till im fine
Someone who wont just leave me behind
To her ill try my hardest to be kind
As I said before im very shy
I always been too scared to try
But no one knows if ill spread my wings and start to fly
If I do ill bring her up to show how beautiful it is up in the sky
But no matter what ill try to find my true love till the day I die
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Oct 3 2005, 12:27 PM
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But no matter what ill try to find my true love till the day I die

^Loved your last line :)
And by the way you do that, you go find your true love, and don't settle for anything less _smile.gif ok

The poem made me smile, thank you for sharing it happy.gif
 
azn_at_heart
post Oct 5 2005, 07:52 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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thx its one of my best ones but summers over and people dont bother to go to my xanga anymore
 
TheReasonWhy
post Oct 5 2005, 07:59 AM
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But im very shy , so I would start off with a hug

aww good line. =D
 
WHOngos144
post Oct 5 2005, 04:49 PM
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nice poem, made me smile :)
 
azn_at_heart
post Oct 6 2005, 10:21 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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thx for the complements i make alot of poems like that...i think....well i dont know y cause it looks like im so depressed on the outside and if i am i dont know y then
 

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