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 Sep 30 2005, 07:55 AM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown  Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804  |
*this is also on my xanga, and this is what i want not i had or have*
True Love I have always believed in true love But im very shy , so I would start off with a hug someone who will always be by my side And my true emotions to her, ill never hide To which ill give a guide To the very deepest of my heart Only if she promises that she wont break it apart Someone there to help me whenever I have a hard time To make me comfortable till im fine Someone who wont just leave me behind To her ill try my hardest to be kind As I said before im very shy I always been too scared to try But no one knows if ill spread my wings and start to fly If I do ill bring her up to show how beautiful it is up in the sky But no matter what ill try to find my true love till the day I die |
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Oct 3 2005, 12:27 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE But no matter what ill try to find my true love till the day I die ^Loved your last line :) And by the way you do that, you go find your true love, and don't settle for anything less  okThe poem made me smile, thank you for sharing it 
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Oct 5 2005, 07:52 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
thx its one of my best ones but summers over and people dont bother to go to my xanga anymore
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Oct 5 2005, 07:59 AM
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 bliss. Group: Member Posts: 735 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,566 |
QUOTE But im very shy , so I would start off with a hug aww good line. =D |
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Oct 5 2005, 04:49 PM
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 Diana =] Group: Member Posts: 1,318 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,147 |
nice poem, made me smile :)
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Oct 6 2005, 10:21 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
thx for the complements i make alot of poems like that...i think....well i dont know y cause it looks like im so depressed on the outside and if i am i dont know y then
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