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Vector, Jennifer Lopez
mind_of_its_own
post Sep 17 2005, 11:06 PM
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Blah, another vector. I really like this vector. It's my third one, but I do admit there are some flaws. The lips are too light for one thing. I used this pic of Jennifer Lopez.

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Criticize please!
 
 
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post Sep 17 2005, 11:09 PM
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she looks dead, her lips are way too light and her eyes are just wandering off
 
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post Sep 17 2005, 11:36 PM
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Her skin and hair look weird. But overall the eyes are OK.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 12:28 AM
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Wow. You really need to work on the skin and hair.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 12:34 AM
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wow, that bad huh?
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 01:15 AM
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wow.. just work on the skin? everything lo0ks okai
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 10:01 AM
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The tone differences are wayyyy too huge. Add more layers, and less of a tone difference.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 10:20 AM
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the shadin is messed up in my opinion
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 10:56 AM
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The eyes are hot, but the shading is rather odd looking.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 12:10 PM
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I like how you did the eyes but add more layers and try using a color palette for the skin! :)
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 01:36 PM
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She looks kinda scary ermm.gif Maybe some more layers on the skin and the gold part in the eye a lil darker and more layers in the hair.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 01:40 PM
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^ yeah, very scary. _unsure.gif the hair looks kinda weird. and the shading needs to be worked on.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 02:04 PM
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the ears are kind of.... elf like
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 02:05 PM
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It's way better than what I can do, but her skin is too pale looking and the shadowing on her face looks like she has paint on. Try to blend.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 06:43 PM
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Er, I don't see how people didn't catch this:

The biggest problem is her lips. If you look at a persons lips, you would see they starts about half an inch below their nose. In your vector, it starts about 2 (relative) inches below her nose.
 
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post Sep 18 2005, 10:10 PM
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is that even her? You need more shading, the eyes are weird and so is the hair.
 
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post Sep 21 2005, 02:47 PM
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omg...that piscture scared the poopie outta me when it first showed up.
 
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post Sep 21 2005, 07:03 PM
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whoa,no offense but i'd start over c0mepletely




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post Sep 21 2005, 07:05 PM
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^ I agree, sorry. Try again.

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post Sep 22 2005, 06:10 AM
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It's nice but her face looks kind of scary... lol
 
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post Sep 22 2005, 02:27 PM
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well, i think...
it looks really great for like if you wanted to use it for more of a gothic theme (and don't reveal that it's JLo)

but, if you were going for a different look, I think a few touchups will really help it ^__^
 
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post Sep 22 2005, 02:46 PM
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to be honest it looks like you rushed through it. I mean, the edges arent very smooth, especially with her hair, and like its been said the skin tones are very off. Try to pull skin colors out of the picture with the eyedropper tool. Also, look and try to adgust the hue and saturation to make it blend and match just right. It takes a lot of adjustment. Also, try using the posterize tool to give you some guides on where to shade her face. Its not bad but it really does need some work. Youre trying to make an artistic rendition of a person, so it has to look like a person for that to work. wink.gif
 

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