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 Sep 8 2005, 11:55 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682  |
it's a shame that i never learned how to say no
somehow i let things get out of control . i looked in your eyes, i thought i saw true, didn't know i was looking at the monster in you . you said that you loved me, you'd always be there, asked me if i trust you, told me you care . repeated that, for me, you'd give up the world . and like the fool that i was, i believed every word . i gave into lust and dirty desire, and now here i am, love left uninspired . |
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Sep 9 2005, 12:07 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
oooooh niceee one!!!!!! im feelin the same way.. stupid girls lol well nicely done im guessin this is based on personal expirience none the less it was koo i liked it
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Sep 9 2005, 03:03 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
The poem made me teary for some reason..
Kind of describes what I'm feeling.. |
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Sep 11 2005, 01:41 PM
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 no news is good news... Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 |
Hey.
That's pretty good. |
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Sep 11 2005, 01:45 PM
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 A laugh spreads, so do some spreading! Group: Member Posts: 529 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,319 |
 Well written!  Is this based on a true experience?My name is Angie too!!!! 
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