Greystreet Academy, not sure if this is against the rules? |
 Sep 7 2005, 07:18 PM
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 ich heisse Meli.  Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016  |
I know you can post poetry, songs, and short stories... but I've recently completed a... novella, I guess you would call it, and I want feedback, badly!!
This is not advertising, I just "published" this on blogger a while back so that I wouldn't have to post pages and pages and pages and pages if I wanted someone to read it. So if anyone has a bit of spare time and likes to read, please go here: http://greystreetacademy.blogspot.com. It's called Greystreet Academy, and it's about a girl named Anna who grows up thinking she is an orphan, and she ends up in a boarding school... and I can't tell any more 
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Sep 9 2005, 06:09 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
that's kinda sad. really.
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| *mipadi* |
Sep 9 2005, 06:27 PM
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Sweet, a novella... Well, I've been looking to get more prose in the Writing section, so I'll have to support that by reading this ASAP.
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Sep 10 2005, 12:19 PM
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ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
QUOTE(moorepocket @ Sep 9 2005, 6:09 PM) that's kinda sad. really.  Wait... what is? |
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Sep 10 2005, 02:59 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
What a delightful story! I was engaged through every phrase, paragraph and page. The resiliency and triumph of the human spirit that you portray through Anna is magnificent. We would all be fortunate to embrace just a fractional part of her journey through life. Great job!
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Sep 11 2005, 01:04 PM
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 i'm such a sucker sometimes. Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732 |
Wow. That is wonderful! It drew me in starting at the very first sentence. I became thoroughly absorbed, and was very sad when it ended. Anna is such a wonderful heroine and your use of imagery is amazing. Great job.
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Sep 11 2005, 01:49 PM
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 no news is good news... Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 |
Oooh a story...
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Sep 11 2005, 02:17 PM
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I.. love it.
It is amazing. Amazing. Amazing. |
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Sep 14 2005, 10:49 PM
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ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
My gosh, thank you guys!!
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Sep 16 2005, 01:33 PM
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 RAWR. Group: Member Posts: 2,585 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,641 |
Oh my gosh. That was so good. I have such a warm fuzzy feeling inside. When you publish your fist book I totally want a copy. Seriously. I kept saying aah this is too long I have stuff to do, but I couldnt stop reading. I love it. I mean seriously. So good.
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Sep 16 2005, 06:15 PM
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I'm totally enjoying it!!! Keep writing!!!
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| *salcha* |
Sep 17 2005, 02:58 AM
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That was beautifully written, and I absolutely loved the characteristics you put into Anna and the others.
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Sep 18 2005, 04:19 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
Wow..I like it..I still remember the story even though I read it more then 2 days ago..
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