Darkness, This was supposed to be a song... but... |
Darkness, This was supposed to be a song... but... |
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![]() What up, dawg? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 235 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,480 ![]() |
... It kinda turned into a poem. It's dedicated to one of my best friends.
***~Darkness~*** by Rin-chan Somewhere out there pounded by rain Walks a boy drowning in pain The sunny days are soon turned dark He doesn't know where to go where to start I knew this boy long, long ago Watched his soul fade, watched him go He never dreamt for a better life Wanted to escape his pain and strife Where he's going he doesn't know Turning away from those who love him so Wanting to know why he's still alive Wanting to know why he hasn't died I tried to protect him from an awful life Tended his wounds and gave him a light Turned all his hurts into sweet smiles It seemed to work for just a while But fate turned his heart another way In a place so bright he couldn't stay Darkness fell as he turned out the light No hope now, he gave up the fight If you see him on a corner at night, tell him I said he'll be all right Tell him, when he's still in sight: Darkness can't exist in the presence of Light... |
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![]() I love Havasupai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 ![]() |
There are times when one must cross the abyss alone. Ony then can we allow the light to radiate from within.
The journey of your friend is hauntingly familiar. Great writing. |
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*torngemini* |
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wow ... that's all I can say ... wow. That hit so close to him and it kinda made me wanna cry. It's soo comfortingly sad ... if that makes any sense. That was great.
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Wow.
It sounds so very familiar. How everything is given up. I love it. |
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![]() no news is good news... ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 ![]() |
That was pretty rad.
-Briar. |
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