Infinite, I've been inspired Options

[kill.t3h.r0cK]

I'm psyched because I've been inspired to write once again after a long period of lacking in inspiration, talent, and ideas. I was listening to Switchfoot again, and their lyrics really inspired me and then my friend, questioned herself...and some other things. But, besides that, here's my poem, it's pretty much lacking in a large vocabulary, but that's alright, inspiration stirred my emotions well enough....Ok, now I'm just rambling. I've never wanted to be a writer, but I love writing and I excel at it...lots more than math, but no matter what, I've always had the urge to write, whether it was journal entries or poems...PAM SHUT UP, STOP RAMBLING ON!!

Infinite
I can look out the window
Or stand in the rain,
Wishing you were here,
But, my surroundings never change,
And, you're never there,
But, it's alright,
Little children and their parents' laughter,
Makes me feel like the world, for a second is just right,
And, then I know that the negativity doesn't matter,
Infinite, is how those moments make me feel,
Even if it's not forever,
I know that it was something real,
Even if it's not forever...

CC welcomed. What do you all think?

[xstab.my.heartx]

Wow. That's pretty rad.

[cazilika]

awesome poem, you write like my best friend does, and she's really good! I'll wait to see another one from you!

[*torngemini*]

lol I liked it beacuse every word that was written in that poem is exactly like how I think on a normal basis. Good work!

[*mishyerr*]

I love it. it flows. :)

[*stephinika*]

^^
agreed. well written and the idea/concept is great.