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old poems, post em
piney
post Aug 16 2005, 07:30 PM
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post old poems you wrote a long time ago.
i wrote these in fourth grade.


Bob, The Man Whose Hair was Made of Cheese

Bob, oh Bob,
His head of cheese,
His hair it grew
Down to his knees.

But chunk by chunk,
And piece by piece,
Cheesy Bob’s hair
Was eaten by bees.

Now all that’s left
Of poor Bob’s hair
Is really nothing
But thin air!

By Julia Carleton



Books

When you open a book
A new world comes to you,
With dragons, castles, and witches, too.

An imaginary life
Forms in you dreams,
And slowly the story unravels its schemes!

By Julia Carleton



Candle

Candle burning in the night
Your drops of gold they shine so bright.
Flickering, crackling, blazing fire
You create the most magnificent light.

By Julia Carleton


Poems

I will never write a poem
I just can’t seem to rhyme
I mess up on the syllables
And misspell every time

I will never be a poet
When I’m fully grown
Wait—I just wrote this poem!
I never would have known!

By Julia Carleton



School

School
A torcher chamber
School
A homework dispenser
Poor Teachers
They have to work in it
Why do they?
Is it good pay?
School
Never liked it, never will
School
Could there be any more work?
Poor Teachers
Hey need to grade mountains of it
What’s the point of school?
To realize how exciting the other things in life are?
School
Learning the same things year after year
School
Those teachers
Don’t they think where they work is horrible?
But then why are they working here?
School
It’ll haunt me forever
Till I’m a graduate
….Then college!

By Julia Carleton
 
Looow
post Aug 16 2005, 09:43 PM
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Aw, those are cute.
 
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post Aug 17 2005, 07:38 AM
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QUOTE
I will never write a poem
I just can’t seem to rhyme
I mess up on the syllables
And misspell every time

I will never be a poet
When I’m fully grown
Wait—I just wrote this poem!
I never would have known!


Lol, that was cute. Hehe-I'm off to look for mt old poems.
 

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