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 Aug 13 2005, 10:26 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
this song is about a 2 day long tragedy with this girl. try your best to think of a mix of AFI: paper airplanes, Atreyu: right side of the bed, Senses fail: tie her down, and Eighteen Visions: i let go for the music.
IT HAPPENS She had the perfect smile A grin that could warm the darkest soul Now when I see that smirk It makes my blood run cold I thought that she would be A new hope, a second chance But due to fates cruel whims They went and blocked off the entrance Sometimes I feel like I’ve been cursed But I know I’ve lived through worse Many other times It’s not the last time or the first I’m underneath my own cloud burst But I don’t mind It happens Oh god, she has the smile Her face is scarred inside of my eyelids I remember when she kissed my lips Now they’re hard pressed against his So sad she was mistaken As the girl for which I’ve always yearned It turns out I was just a patron But I guess I’m glad I got my turn Sometimes I feel like I’ve been cursed But I know I’ve lived through worse Many other times It’s not the last time or the first I’m underneath my cloud burst But I don’t mind IT HAPPENS I don’t mind I don’t mind I don’t mind at all I’ll be fine Sometimes I feel like I’ve been cursed But I know I’ve lived through worse Many other times It’s not the last time or the first I’m underneath my cloud burst But I’ll be fine SHIT HAPPENS |
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Aug 16 2005, 05:28 PM
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 *scribble scribble* Group: Member Posts: 1,314 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 119,610 |
did this really happen to you?
i like it. you dont really find out what happens until the middle and after that is just repitition. |
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Aug 16 2005, 05:41 PM
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 sunshiine Group: Member Posts: 1,080 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,360 |
I like it too. I feel sorry for whoever the guy was though.. if it happened to you.. im sorry to hear that.
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Aug 17 2005, 03:02 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
that did happen to me not even a week ago. haha. but i'm over it. she's a straight up, lame ass hussy. hehehe =]
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| *stephinika* |
Aug 17 2005, 06:03 PM
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wow, very well written. i love your work. i like your choice of words and it seems to flow nicely.
sorry to hear about that, but good to hear you're over it. 
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| *Kathleen* |
Aug 20 2005, 05:54 AM
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Aww. *Huggles*
 Like I told you when we were talking - there are plenty of cuter girls out there that are awesome-er, too. 
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