Saddness Comes in Many Forms..., it's actually a song i made up. Options

[FlipBoy20]

i was bored, and really sad so i wrote a song.

Saddness Comes in Many Forms

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saddness comes, in many forms.
some of which, cannot just be ignored.
perhaps i should of left you long ago.
but you kept loving me, i couldn't go.
a new day came, and sun did rise.
everyday you would kiss me by suprise.
i met your friends, i met them all.
one time you fell right in hall.
before my eyes, i had to care.
if i never existed, you'd be left right there...

(solo)

there's that day, i held you by my side.
i was hugging you, but then you cried.
cheerful tears running down you face.
a sign of the never ending fall of grace.
but in the end, it's just all gone.
there's really no point in going on.
i'm in the dark, all alone.
my light is gone, now i moan...

(solo)

i've never felt, this kind of pain.
it feels as if though, it was all in vain.
i always told you how i felt.
you said the same, your words always made me melt.
i was so glad, that you were mine.
now you're gone, you were very kind...

(solo)

i always loved you, still i do
we should start over, make something new.
forget the past, which is long gone.
let's die together, one and one.

we'll grow up, build our lives.
hand in hand, we will survive.
but as for now, we are apart.
nothing can change that, you left my heart...

(slow ending)

tell me what you think.

[FlipBoy20]

oh, and by the way. i posted this for feedback.