i had a dream, verse 1 of my full rap |
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 Aug 5 2005, 09:54 AM
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I had a dream
Last night a had a dream// That everyone stopped scheming// And everyone stopped screaming// Then all the gangsta’s just paused// And wanted to know the cause// Why were they killin?// Maybe to get money for their kids that are illin// Why they killin another person?// Just to get some penicillin// Why are they living this life?// With only one perspective of life// Then they thought and said// “there’s no reason”// Then seasons changed// Life went on// Turned out nothing went wrong since that moment in time// Crime went down// Then everyone started to shine// should i keep goin? any comments to help my verse would be cool one |
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Aug 6 2005, 12:11 AM
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 Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
its aight i like where you're goin with it i look forward to the finished version
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