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 Aug 3 2005, 01:55 PM
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 Clarissa  Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,396  |
heres the result of about 20 minutes on psp9 (bored)
its lyrics are from the song "on my own" from les miserables :) constructive criticism (sp?) and comments please! :)  ^ click :: i dont know why the font is all ugly looking :( help me! thanks!! |
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Aug 3 2005, 02:10 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Okay, I don't know, but they way things look in the image is really nice, but to me, the vibe it gives off is dull.
 Or is it supposed to have that oldish look to it?  I would imagine it would look nicer if it were brighter and had more contrast. Oh yeah, what that line thing at the right? Anywho, good job on it. I like the image and everything. It just looks a little boring. Eek. Sorry. 
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Aug 3 2005, 02:26 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
well its pretty hard to see cuz its realy dark.. but i guess the good thing about that is it makes it really misterious like.
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Aug 3 2005, 02:32 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
It is too dark. And there's a line going down to the right.
Brighten it up, and yea? Maybe you should change the font. Scriptina is so overused and, well, frankly something else would look alot better, IMO. |
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Aug 3 2005, 03:22 PM
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Clarissa Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,396 |
ok i fixed up the font, the "contrast", and the line
now tell me what you think and i was trying to make it kinda mysterious and sad...  ^click ew the font is still all disgusting. oh well. i give up |
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Aug 3 2005, 03:56 PM
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 i lost weight with Mulder! Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,070 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,019 |
my monitor wont let me see it. so...its probably too dark. even though my monitors a piece of crap.
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Aug 3 2005, 03:58 PM
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 your sweet six six six Group: Member Posts: 61 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 84,909 |
I don't think the picture goes with the theme of the song.
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Aug 3 2005, 04:00 PM
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 ¢¾ Wanting it. ¢¾ Group: Member Posts: 2,060 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,234 |
the new one you just posted is an improvment. its good.
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Aug 3 2005, 04:00 PM
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¢¾ Wanting it. ¢¾ Group: Member Posts: 2,060 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,234 |
the new one you just posted is an improvment. its good.
[err double posted] sorry |
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