something i wrote, poetry |
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 Jul 28 2005, 01:15 PM
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 a_walk_thru_hell*  Group: Member Posts: 66 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,999  |
I've tried and fell. I tried and fell apart.
Fell to the ground and watched my life as it floated above me. I lay tired and bruised, Restrain myself from substance and abuse. Ground breaking laugh. I'll never miss it. I never want it back. So graceful in the way we move The only direction were headed is down. Falling forward and spinning just to ease the pain. I know this was my own choice. To let myself become the drug thirsty monster inside. But I can't see it as beauty. Not in these broken eyes of mine. |
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Jul 28 2005, 04:47 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Beautiful. I love the words you use and the way you put it all together. Gives a feeling of struggle and frustration. Keep up the good work.
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