The Crazy Times |
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| *RockizLife* |
 Jul 28 2005, 06:36 AM
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The Crazy Times
So these are the crazy times I've heard about When you're lost all you find is doubt When everything's so rushed and life's just slipping Either I fall or I find myself tripping Could someone guide me with some sort of way? I'm getting worse with each passing day She said she saw ahead a light of hope Maybe I'm blind or I just can't cope Here's to these crazy times Life's not always as peaceful as the wind chimes Here's to the lucky one who steals her heart And tears our love further apart Here's to lost hope and senseless belief That we would ever rid ourselves of grief And to everyone with a bloody broken heart Maybe we'll make it, so here's to a new start I said I'd never say this But in her eyes I found my lost bliss Despite this I'm going to move on Even when I feel like all hope is gone Even in this worlds twisted rhymes I'll hold my glass up and say "Here's to the crazy times" © Brenden Noll |
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Jul 30 2005, 03:24 PM
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 Sunlight--shine on me.  Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201 |
That is SOOO good. It needs to be a song. It's just calling for a melody. I <3 it sooooo much. Good job.
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Jul 31 2005, 12:55 PM
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 straight as a rainbow and twice as colorful Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,415 |
I love it, especially the last line
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