My song, my depressed song., I need feedback please. Options

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Emotions
Matt McDonough


The emotion
flows through me.
It fills me.
Makes me stronger,
but at the same time
It breaks me
Makes me no longer.

I wish I could have said what I felt.
The cards that I played weren't those that were dealt
to me before.
I turned away,
Walked away,
I wish I didn't talk that way,

I asked one last time for something there,
you looked at me like you didn't care.
It kills me inside,
fills me inside,
how many times I cried,
feel like I've died.

The emotion
Flows through me
It fills me.
Makes me stronger,
but at the same time
It breaks me
Makes me no longer.

I was down on my knees begging for a chance
Looking for something, some kind of romance
but it wasn't meant to be
between you and me
now that I can see
there is no one here for me.

There was nothing in my life until I met you
I knew when I saw you it was really true
that was the time I cared
was the time we shared
was it that we were scared?

you'll never know,
we'll just keep goin' on
keep movin' on
as I sing this song
it won't be long
till you forget about me, maybe you already did
I lived for you I really did
gotta keep movin on

The emotion
Flows through me
It fills me.
Makes me stronger,
but at the same time
It breaks me
Makes me no longer.

repeat chorus 2X, music slows down on next to last line of chorus, all instruments except acoustic guitar drop out. one last chorus, slower than normal, only lead singer sings, with acoustic "accompaniment"<~Spelling?