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| *Kathleen* |
 Jul 6 2005, 12:56 AM
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Haven't posted here in awhile...
"Serial Killer" Too fragile to keep, It preys on teh innocent And consumes their sleep Please be cautious You must understand It murders by numbers We've got a serial killer at hand No way to escape Nowhere to hide No plan of attack Stand still and give into its grasp Its mark: a vital organ With an M.O. of everything Seen in the form of both man and woman Unseen with a lust to kill More morbid than one could imagine One's only defense is their will Just as the dead never lie Untold stories never end happy We're all just waiting to die Please be cautious You must understand It murders by numbers We've got a serial killer at hand No way to escape Nowhere to hide No plan of attack Stand still and give into its grasp |
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Jul 6 2005, 01:01 PM
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 Save a guitar, bang a guitarist.  Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,916 |
I really like it! It's deep but not too deep if that makes sense and overall it's just a really great poem. My favorite stanza or whatever is the "Unseen with a lust to kill, etc." Very, very good.
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Jul 9 2005, 01:22 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
cool.
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