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 Jun 30 2005, 03:00 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
fetish
for the bizarre teardropped pillows turn me on cry me a million tears because love hurts i dont want to hurt you i cant help it if i do bu ti love it when you cry weep a while for joy? but love HURTS! but what about the caresses? gentle touches? the LOVE? 'neath the weeping willow sob your heart out to the soil while i sit and watched, bemused what the f**k are you on? im sorry, but this isnt normal. are you crying to please me think i have the sick fantasy? but even if i did, why weep for sadness? come on... |
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Jun 30 2005, 04:16 PM
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 Lauren loves YOU. Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
i like it. a touch sadistic, but that's what gives the poem its charm.
wonderful job. 
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Jul 5 2005, 09:20 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jun 30 2005, 3:00 PM) fetish for the bizarre teardropped pillows turn me on cry me a million tears because love hurts i dont want to hurt you i cant help it if i do bu ti love it when you cry weep a while for joy? but love HURTS! but what about the caresses? gentle touches? the LOVE? 'neath the weeping willow sob your heart out to the soil while i sit and watched, bemused what the f**k are you on? im sorry, but this isnt normal. are you crying to please me think i have the sick fantasy? but even if i did, why weep for sadness? come on...  What kind of girl is she? Does she hide from it? Is it unknown to her, therefore she fears it? I wish I could better understand this... |
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Jul 5 2005, 09:22 PM
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 d@niel Group: Member Posts: 1,267 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,453 |
nice work! i really like it, i think it sometimes relates to my life..thanks for sharing!
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Jul 5 2005, 11:24 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
QUOTE(yummy_delight @ Jun 30 2005, 2:16 PM) i like it. a touch sadistic, but that's what gives the poem its charm. wonderful job. I agree 100%. 
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Jul 6 2005, 02:33 AM
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^^
i also agree...but still well done. i love your style of writing...
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Jul 9 2005, 01:24 AM
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Mr. Hottie Group: Member Posts: 406 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,225 |
very weeping
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