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look at it all, look at yourself
RiddleMeWonders
post Jun 27 2005, 02:09 AM
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fell in love with a boy
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Magnificence.
One word, my thoughts.
Awe of everyone else
Scared to submitt
Lest I am not what I used to be
For a brief moment that
Magnificence
Was me.

But I wince with a short sighted smile
shaking my head at my blunders
considering everything worth more than it is
until at last i see
they are no better, no worse than me
and I am the fool
because I let myself believe
comparison right now
was my main priority
when in fact what I should have been thinking about
were the damn dishes
and expression
i could have written millions
well not millions
but maybe 50 pieces
over the damn dishes.
 
*stephinika*
post Jun 28 2005, 12:09 AM
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wow. such strong words...i like it. you put it together very well. keep it up. _smile.gif
 
[Deep]Thought63
post Jul 9 2005, 01:44 AM
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strong.
 

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