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 Jun 13 2005, 02:28 PM
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 i'm such a sucker sometimes.  Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732  |
I just sit here, waiting
In the dark depths of my mind I just sit here, fading Unsure of what I'll find Demons dance before me Faeries at my feet I scream, but they ignore me Afraid of what I'll meet Black roses drip their poison Like deadly tears they fall I feel like a prisoner Trapped within these walls Held hostage by my inner world Alone inside my head The story of a lonely girl Who everyone thought dead "A few more pills won't hurt me" Was the lie I told myself The bottle left, still open Lying sideways on the shelf Now I sit here, cold and dazed Inside my screwed up head Running in an endless maze 'Til I am surely dead I shall die a prisoner To this thoughtless suicide The goblins and the faeries laugh As they watch me die A prisoner to my inner world A prisoner to myself 'Cause of the bottle left, still open Lying sideways on the shelf. ----------------------- Not one of my best works, but oh well. |
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Jun 13 2005, 02:29 PM
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i'm such a sucker sometimes. Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732 |
Ooops.
It should be, "The goblins and the faeries laugh As they watch me slowly die." |
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Jun 13 2005, 04:51 PM
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 vat ist dis? Group: Member Posts: 142 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 152,500 |
That is a totally awesome poem!!!
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Jun 13 2005, 07:30 PM
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i'm such a sucker sometimes. Group: Member Posts: 441 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 151,732 |
^_^ Thank you, but it's really not that good. I wrote it in about 2 minutes.
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