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 Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM
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i am the loner of life that soothes the torturing burdens of dead souls.
give me you tortures. i'll have the taste of your hurt blood be sipped through my veins. i'll take away your pain. i'll sacrafice my health. let me be your hero, let me be your shield. i'll make you alive again to let myself die. dead souls don't deserve misery, the torture that they took are now mine. dead souls, i will heal you. dead souls, i will take your place. dead souls, i will make you see that i'm the one that deserves misery. give me your pains, and everything will be fine. you don't deserve your torments because i'm the one who never cries. release...release... release... everything is fine. smile and be happy, let me be the one to die. _____ a poem i wrote. one of my favs nurturing, and suicidal. or actually more sacrificial than suicidal. wuts your translation? |
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Jun 9 2005, 01:56 AM
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"sick love song" that's exactly what it reminds me of. not so much the actual song itself but the title
 i really like it though it's extremely deep.
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Jun 9 2005, 02:37 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 224 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,206 |
thank you.
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Jun 9 2005, 04:45 PM
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me likes it too
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Jun 10 2005, 04:21 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 224 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,206 |
thanks for the comment
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