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 Jun 7 2005, 07:38 PM
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mood: content  Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325  |
This is sort of my first vector but I didn't put it in that topic since I wanted direct feedback.
 I did some vector practice before but I wanted to try the choppy look... Duration: 30 minutes - 1 hour? Layers: o_o Ierno. I got really lazy on the arms + hair.  And that white thing dangling from her fingers is a cigarette. |
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Jun 7 2005, 08:19 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
The skin bothers me. Scary that I knew what the cigarette was before I read the comment. Hm.
Very nice, I like. Practice more and spend a tad more time on your vectoring and I think you'll be a great artist. |
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Jun 7 2005, 08:32 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
QUOTE(nyah-nek0 @ Jun 7 2005, 8:19 PM) The skin bothers me. Scary that I knew what the cigarette was before I read the comment. Hm. Very nice, I like. Practice more and spend a tad more time on your vectoring and I think you'll be a great artist.  Aw thanks. 
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Jun 7 2005, 09:04 PM
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 jiyOunnn~ Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,706 |
that's really good!
but, if you used more layers, it would be even better. lols |
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Jun 7 2005, 09:13 PM
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gigi =p Group: Member Posts: 3,679 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,206 |
Cool, you pull off the "less is more" philosophy on vectors well (pertaining to layers). I like your style.
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Jun 7 2005, 09:20 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
IMAO , when I saw vector time all i thought about is " it HAMMER time " keke
I likee it , even choppy. |
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Jun 8 2005, 12:10 AM
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i really like it!
 ...better than anything i could have done
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Jun 8 2005, 12:39 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 515 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,039 |
thats really good for your first vector!
its nice..i like it =) |
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Jun 8 2005, 01:11 AM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
it has its own kind of style a lil i like it.
but yea its a lil choppy. |
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Jun 8 2005, 09:43 AM
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lol i really liked it. i first i thought the cigarette was a tissue
 it's choppy but not at the same time...does that make sense?
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Jun 8 2005, 11:04 AM
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 mmm hmmm Group: Member Posts: 1,591 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,325 |
not bad. just keep working on the hands and hair.
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Jun 8 2005, 04:19 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
QUOTE(ItzOnlySydney @ Jun 8 2005, 9:43 AM) lol i really liked it. i first i thought the cigarette was a tissue it's choppy but not at the same time...does that make sense?That's what I think now that I look at it [the choppy but not choppy part]. Maybe it's more liquidy than choppy?
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Jun 8 2005, 08:23 PM
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Choppy, but better than what i can do.
 I like it though. 
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Jun 12 2005, 04:59 PM
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it has its own style..very cool...kinda grundgy looking..
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Jun 13 2005, 03:55 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I think it's great for your first try! i like the choppy, grundgy look :) Very cool, keep developing your style!
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Jun 13 2005, 10:22 AM
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great for your first. i'm going to start my first vector soon too.
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Jun 13 2005, 11:33 AM
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Its a little choppy in some places but overall I like it.
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Jun 13 2005, 02:01 PM
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it's really good for your first. I like that style too.
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Jun 13 2005, 03:57 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 32 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,552 |
i like the feel of the vector. though, i would put a little bit more layers on the arm.
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Jun 13 2005, 07:25 PM
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 Go to Tahiti, and make out with a native. Group: Duplicate Posts: 914 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,267 |
hmmm...the hair looks...flat. it needs more deminsion. the face looks really good though.
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Jun 13 2005, 08:40 PM
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 ich heisse Meli. Group: Member Posts: 909 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,016 |
I really like it, it's a totally different look than most of them! And I'd love to see the original image too :)
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Jun 13 2005, 09:25 PM
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ew. Group: Member Posts: 55 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 152,575 |
you made her look like she has demented face shape.
and theres no distinction between the jaw line and her hair. |
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