poem: Let it fall, tell me what you think |
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 May 28 2005, 06:54 PM
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 <-[RaWR]->  Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,133  |
Let it Fall I cant stop thinking of When it rained that night I thought I knew the meaning of love And I believed I was right A voice whispered into my ear An crepted into my heart "Hold her tight,hold her near" Thats when it began to start I had this obsession inside of me And Lied to you straight to your face Didnt want you to see So our love began to erase I felt so empty deep down inside You were drifting away While I was trying to hide You didnt know what to say Talking didnt work I was confused in my mind Why does love hurt? This answer was hard to find I didnt know you any more Not as I use to I felt so unsure Didnt know what to do Just as rain is cold So was I I didntt want your hand to hold So I made you cry Now water falls down on me It makes me feel the pain But yet I finaly see I am the rain |
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May 28 2005, 09:11 PM
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Wow, that's really good...
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May 29 2005, 04:12 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow thats good..kinda sad though..
 good job!
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May 29 2005, 05:11 AM
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 Like i care. ♥ Group: Member Posts: 780 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 124,706 |
wow thats beautiful :)
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May 30 2005, 10:14 PM
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Wow,that was a really great poem
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May 31 2005, 01:47 PM
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<-[RaWR]-> Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,133 |
thx alot everyone
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Jun 4 2005, 02:15 AM
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great poem and i really felt this one =)
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