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danishcookiez
post May 25 2005, 08:38 PM
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Those eyes
-I've seen them before...

among the blue
of the seas from past summer
where those laughing memories still play
from time to time,

mixed with the purple
of the iris
that an old crush had given to me
the tender moment
the surge of emotions,

drenched with the green
from the paint
a younger cousin
had splashed on my new dress
with mischief about his aura,

hidden in that fond grey
that lingers about my city
in its foggy spectacle hanging drearily
almost sadly
upon its denizens.

Your chocolate brown eyes
they just
-leave me so...

dizzy....
 
xXirockhardXx
post May 25 2005, 09:15 PM
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Its very cute. I like the purple & blue part the most. =]
 
*stephinika*
post May 25 2005, 11:18 PM
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wow, i really like how you went through the different colours and different scenarios. i quite like this. _smile.gif nice job.
 
d0nchikit0
post May 26 2005, 06:43 PM
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I think a red woulda worked well.. I think it's good...

8/10 *thumbsup*
 
danishcookiez
post May 26 2005, 08:50 PM
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^ yea, but the different colors represent different aspects of his personality, I just didn't think red suited anything

thanks you guys! _smile.gif
 

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