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 May 24 2005, 09:07 PM
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May 24 2005, 09:24 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
 wow i didnt know you'd write such good poems !! very well done i like them XD "iht doesnt matter that iht's hard to love a G" your a real G HUH!! =] |
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May 24 2005, 09:59 PM
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May 24 2005, 11:14 PM
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not bad. some of your vocabulary makes it less...i don't know...pretty? haha yeah i'm not too good with words either, but its not bad. the flow works pretty well - slightly awkward on some parts. keep up the good work.
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